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Post by Kiwi on Sept 20, 2003 17:13:17 GMT -5
keep adding pelase, ur so good
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 20, 2003 17:25:08 GMT -5
aww can u please add more soon! please?!
alitha xoxox
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Post by ~¤~Cuddles~¤~ on Sept 20, 2003 17:56:39 GMT -5
Yeah its great Remz Please update asap Luv, Han
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Post by Hannahfan on Sept 21, 2003 6:44:15 GMT -5
"Calvin that girl called Cathy really scared me..." Hannah said as they both headed to their hotle room. "Don't worry babe.....I'm with you" Calvin said putting his arm around Hannah. Hannah smiled at him sweetly. "Right I think this is our room.....Number 7" Calvin said standing by the door. He put his key into the locker and unlocked the door. The room was quite dusty and dark. "This is horrible" Hannah said giving one look around. "Yeah well at least we have a tv" Calvin said grinning. Hannah laughed as she shut the door.
Meanwhile with Aaron and Frankie
"Don't you think the receptionest was a bit strange" Frankie asked with a worried tone in her voice. "Frankie calm donw......you've been asking questions for every little thing you've seen" Aaron said going into their room. "It's not my fault Aaron....you know how panicked I get" Frankie said. "Come here..." Aaron said pulling Frankie into a hug. "It will be ok" he whispered into her ear...
With Stacey, Jay, Rochelle and Jay.
"That Cathy girl looked really nice didn't she?" Daisy asked the others as she dropped her bag on the floor. "Unlike this room" she added as she saw how dusty the room was. "Daisy you're really weird....I was just about to say how creepy she looked" Rochelle said also checking the room. "Well alright guys....we'll see you later....we're going to our room" Jay shouted to Daisy and Rochelle from the door. "Don't leave us....I'm scared" Daisy said. "Bye guys" Stacey shouted in before Jay closed the door behind them. "Now what are we going to do" Daisy said frowing herself on the sofa....
With Hannah and Calvin....
"I wonder what Aaron's doing....you know how much he hates the mess" Hannah said laughing as she sat on the sofa next to Calvin who was wacthing the tv. "Yeah....he probaly has a dust pan in his hand and is cleaning the room" Calvin said laughing as he put his arm around Hannah. Hannah joined in. "Wonder what's on tv..." Hannah said grabbing the remote from Calvins hand and flicking through the channels. "Yay the scream" Calvin said grabbing back the remote from Hannah's hand so she couldn't change the channel. "Calvin..." Hannah said.... Halfway through the film....
Footsteps could be heard from Hannah's and Calvin's room. "Calvin...."
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 21, 2003 7:33:34 GMT -5
oooh wonder who it is?! im gettin scared! mummy?! lol! great update! keep posting! alitha xoxox
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Post by Kiwi on Sept 23, 2003 17:44:30 GMT -5
hannah fan !!! wen u gonan post again?? im dying to read the next part. please please please post!!!!pretty pretty please with a cherry on top
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Post by Hannahfan on Sept 25, 2003 13:03:56 GMT -5
"Calvin....Calvin whats that?" Hannah asked with a panicky tone in her voice.... "Shhhhh...." Calvin said trying to listen for more steps. "I think someone's in the room" Calvin whispered. "WHAT" Hannah yelled. "Shhhhh quiet" Calvin whispered to Hannah. "Get something hard in your hand and follow me" Calvin said grabbing a piece of metal which he had found in the room. They stood behind the door just as the door opened. Hannah and Calvin raised their hands ready to hit whoever it was that opened the door with the object they had in their hand. Someone stepped in from the dark and the next second was hit by a cushion that came from Hannah. "Ouch" a girls voice was heard. Whoever it was that had just stepped in moved infront of the light. "FRANKIE" Hannah and Calvin said... "I only came to ask if you wanted to do something but I have done the wrong thing" Frankie said holding onto her head. "Oh sorry Frankie....that was me....we thought someone had broken in this hotel room" Hannah said. "It's ok..." Frankie replied smiling slightly. Calvin looked at the cushion that was on the floor. "Hannah did you know that I said grab something hard and not soft" Calvin said laughing. "Oh yeah......I couldn't find anything else so I grabbed anything I could" Hannah said a little red....... "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh" Daisys screaming was heard....l "DAISY...." Hannah shouted worried that something had happened to her friend. She ran out of the room and looked down the corridor to see................................................................................
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Post by Kiwi on Sept 25, 2003 21:24:47 GMT -5
am, i allowed to add??
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Post by Hannahfan on Sept 26, 2003 10:18:42 GMT -5
Daisy ran upto Hannah screaming closely followed by Rochelle who was also screaming. "What? What is it?" Hannah asked them worried. "It's it's..." Daisy stuttered but the words wouldn't come out. "It's what Daisy? Is there someone in your room...." Hannah asked panicking. Daisy nodded as she still couldn't talk. "Who is it?" Hannah asked getting more scared. Calvin and Frankie were also gathered around them now..... "Hannah calm down....who is it Daisy?" Calvin asked rubbing Hannah's shoulders. "It's a spider" Daisy shouted in a panic tone. Everyone looked at Daisy blankly.... "Guys I said there's a spider in my room" Daisy said looking from one to another waiting for a reaction. "What? A spider?" Hannah asked boringly. "Yeah" Daisy said. Calvin started to laugh. "What?" Daisy asked annoyed. "All that commotion was just for a spider" he replied laughing as he went back in the room. "So are you coming to my room Han?" Frankie asked. "Sorry I'm a bit tired after all that" Hannah said and Frankie smiled. "It's ok....see you later..." Frankie said laughing on her way thinking even she wouldn't be that fussy like Daisy. Hannah walked over to the sofa and throwed herself on it. "Oi budge up I need some space as well" Calvin said coming from the kitchen with a packet of crisps. "Could you please bring me a packet of crisps please please, pretty please" Hannah asked smiling at Calvin sweetly as she sat up. "Oh ok.....didn't you know that boys are supposed to be lazy not girls" Calvin said after giving one of his gorgeus smiles at Hannah. "Thank you" Hannah simply replyed. Calvin came back with another packet of crisps and sat down next to Hannah. "Anything on tv?" Hannah asked as she flicking the channels through.... Calvin stared at Hannah as she did this... "Oh this seems nice" Hannah said settling herself on the sofa. She tried to concentrate on tv when she realised Calvin was looking at her. "What?" Hannah asked confused. "Nothing..." Calvin said smiling as he put his arm around Hannah. Just as Hannah was getting very settled the door of the room swung open....
(Kiwi....yeah you can add if you want to)
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 26, 2003 10:29:49 GMT -5
omg ur fanfic is awesome! please post more soon! please?!?!?!?!?
alitha xoxox
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Post by parsnipgirl on Sept 26, 2003 12:19:13 GMT -5
yeah, plzzzzzzzzzzz ;D its sooooo good!!
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Sept 26, 2003 21:37:45 GMT -5
omg yeah i agree plzzzzzzzzzz add its terrific
lotsa luv
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Post by Hannahfan on Sept 27, 2003 7:30:13 GMT -5
Hannah exchanged looks with Calvin before quickly looking towards the door. No one came in.... They waited a little more time but still no one came in. "Calvin?" Hannah said looking at him. Calvin just shrugged. She looked at the door. "Hello?" she said looking at the door. No one replied back. "Anyone there?" she said again panicking. Just then the window swung open really quickly and air rushed in. "Who is it?" Hannah yelled getting more scared by the minute. "Shhh calm down" Calvin said hugging her. "Sorry for taking so long.....I was trying to push the trolley in" Catherine's was heard as her figure appered by the door. "You could've said something back" Hannah said angrily. "I brought your dinner" Cathy said ignoring Hannah. She placed it on the table.... "Like I said.....you must be really brave to stay in this hotel" Catherine said as she left. "Why does she keep saying that?" Hannah asked Calvin just as Aaron and Frankie came in. "Did that receptionest came in here as well" Frankie asked. "Yeah why?" Hannah asked. "She was really weird....first the door swung open and then we called out to see who it was but there was no reply and then she came in five minutes later and when she left she said "You must be really brave to stay in this hotel" Frankie explained sitting on the sofa opposite to Hannah and Calvin. "Thats what she did to us as well" Calvin said as Aaron sat next to Frankie... "Weird...." Aaron said. "I hope we get out of here soon...." Hannah said looking out of the window.... "And you will" someones voice was heard as everyone turned to the door...........................
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Post by Hannahfan on Sept 28, 2003 16:19:38 GMT -5
Sally stood there, the coach driver next to her. "Are we going?" Hannah asked excitedly....... "Yep....come on get ready to leave" Sally replies. "You don't know how glad I am to live.....that Cathy girl was really creepy" Hannah said collecting her stuff from the floor. "We know" Sally said. "You know...how do you know? You weren't here....you was trying to get some help" Hannah said turning her head so that she was looking up at Sally... "Well when we went to get help from a little village....I told them that we needed help and that you lot were here. We were really shocked to hear that Cathy is actually mentally ill....and this is not even a hotel....This is her grandparents house who actually died ages ago" Sally explained. "What?" gasped everyone. "Right I'm not staying here another second" Frankie said getting freaked out and going over to Sally. "Come on lets go hurry up" Frankie told the others. "Did you hear about this house and Cathy?" Stacey asked as her, Jay, Daisy and Rochelle appeared by the door. "Yeah Sally just told us" Calvin replied. "I'm ready" Hannah said walking over to Sally. "So are we" Aaron and Calvin said. "Come on everyone lets head to the bus" Sally ordered.
"Hey Sally did you pay to Cathy" Rochelle asked once they were in the bus. "Yeah I got that sorted out" Sally replied looking at Rochelle from the mirror. "Aaron is it ok if I sit next to Frankie?" Hannah asked turning over to them. "Why?" Aaron asked. "You don't know what a pain Calvin is" Hannah said talking towards Calvin who was really annoying her now. "Oi......" Calvin said starting to tickle Hannah. "Calvin...........get....off" Hannah said through all the laughter. "Shouldn't have said that should you..." Calvin said finally stopping. "Sorry Han....can't be bothred to get off I disagree" Aaron said very sleepy. "Ok...." Hannah said turning to Calvin. "I didn't really mean it....I was only messing....I knew Aaron would say no anyway" Hannah said smiling sweetly at Calvin. "It's ok..." Calvin said smiling back. "Is it ok if I rest my head on your shoulder?" Hannah asked. "Sure" Calvin replied. Hannah rested her head on Calvin's shoulder for a very long time when she finally fell asleep. Calvin covered her by putting his jacket over Hannah making sure she wasn't cold.....
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 28, 2003 20:20:31 GMT -5
awww! great update! i luv ur fic! update update update!
alitha xoxox
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