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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 27, 2003 22:27:38 GMT -5
great update! can u please post more soon! y don't u post sumthing?
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 27, 2003 22:33:43 GMT -5
im really crap @ writing fanfics i'll just ruin the story 4 the rest of ya.
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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 27, 2003 22:45:10 GMT -5
no u won't! please!? *puppy dog eyes*
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 27, 2003 23:06:51 GMT -5
ok i'll post sumfing but not rite now cos im goin out sowie! promise 2 post ASAP! ive got 2 sentences goin so far!
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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 28, 2003 0:32:20 GMT -5
ok, i'll wait. *waiting*
*still waiting*
*still waiting*
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 28, 2003 3:22:39 GMT -5
ok soooo sowie 4 taking so long! it takes me a while 2 get it just right. sorry if its crap - you can delete then. other than that hope u like it!
"I don't know Aaron...I just don't know anymore. I love you, I really do. I just don't know if this - me and you - will work out..." with her forehead on Aaron's after they pulled apart from their kiss. "Please Frankie, don't do this" he whispered into her ear and started to shed tears. "I'm so sorry Az. It's just...I can't bear the thought of what Daisy will do to break us up if we did get back together" Frankie cried trying to break away from Aaron. "No Frankie! Don't even mention her name! What she does is her problem!" Aaron said raising his voice which shocks Frankie and himself. "Let go of me! Daisy's isn't the only reason I don't want us to get together!" Frankie shouted "What?" Aaron asked jerking away to look at Frankie in the eye, only to find her glancing down on the floor trying to find something interesting. “What do you mean?” Aaron asked getting scared. “I mean - I don’t know if I can trust you anymore!” and with that Frankie stormed off into her bedroom slamming the door. Aaron was left in the kitchen stunned.
Hannah’s POV: I heard Frankie’s bedroom slam. Az and Franx’s relationship must really be on the rocks now thanks to Daisy. I hope they get back together cos if they don’t, I’ll have to whack them with a bat to get some sense into their brains! Seeing that example I don’t want Calvin and I to turn out like that! He’s everything to me, my rock, my best friend, my boyfriend, my perfect other half! OMG! I know what I want now!
Normal POV: Hannah realising that she’s in love with Calvin, starts running toward Calvin’s room. Knocking on the door frantically “Calvin, Calvin please open the door?!” Inside Calvin was just lying on his bed looking up at the ceiling daydreaming about Han and their time dancing outside in the lounge room till 6.30am. Dancing and holding onto her like a fragile piece of glass like there was no tomorrow. Her body fitted his in all the right places and their gentle swaying to the music made out they were the only ones left in the world. Awoken by Hannah’s loud knocking Calvin went and opened the door to a frenzied Hannah collapsing into his arms, embracing him for dear life. “Calvin, I know what I want now” Hannah said running out of breath from dashing from one side of the house to the other. Pulling herself away from the hug just enough so that she could see Calvin’s confused face. “I want y-” Hannah collapsed before she finished her sentence. Fortunately Calvin was holding onto her before she fell to the floor “Hannah!”
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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 28, 2003 3:50:38 GMT -5
WOW! You're really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Sept 28, 2003 3:59:32 GMT -5
yeah that was excillent (sp) ;D
lotsa luv
em xoxo
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Post by Hannahfan on Sept 28, 2003 4:13:49 GMT -5
How can you say you're crap? You're soooo much better then me
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Sept 28, 2003 4:18:46 GMT -5
hu me no ur fantastic lol (im sooo sweet) lotsa luv em xoxo
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Sept 28, 2003 4:37:34 GMT -5
thanks u 4 da comments. really appreciate it! but u peeps are way better writing fics than me!
neways...sum1 continue on the story! ;D
love alitha xoxox
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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 28, 2003 5:14:24 GMT -5
ok soooo sowie 4 taking so long! it takes me a while 2 get it just right. sorry if its crap - you can delete then. other than that hope u like it! "I don't know Aaron...I just don't know anymore. I love you, I really do. I just don't know if this - me and you - will work out..." with her forehead on Aaron's after they pulled apart from their kiss. "Please Frankie, don't do this" he whispered into her ear and started to shed tears. "I'm so sorry Az. It's just...I can't bear the thought of what Daisy will do to break us up if we did get back together" Frankie cried trying to break away from Aaron. "No Frankie! Don't even mention her name! What she does is her problem!" Aaron said raising his voice which shocks Frankie and himself. "Let go of me! Daisy's isn't the only reason I don't want us to get together!" Frankie shouted "What?" Aaron asked jerking away to look at Frankie in the eye, only to find her glancing down on the floor trying to find something interesting. “What do you mean?” Aaron asked getting scared. “I mean - I don’t know if I can trust you anymore!” and with that Frankie stormed off into her bedroom slamming the door. Aaron was left in the kitchen stunned. Hannah’s POV: I heard Frankie’s bedroom slam. Az and Franx’s relationship must really be on the rocks now thanks to Daisy. I hope they get back together cos if they don’t, I’ll have to whack them with a bat to get some sense into their brains! Seeing that example I don’t want Calvin and I to turn out like that! He’s everything to me, my rock, my best friend, my boyfriend, my perfect other half! OMG! I know what I want now! Normal POV: Hannah realising that she’s in love with Calvin, starts running toward Calvin’s room. Knocking on the door frantically “Calvin, Calvin please open the door?!” Inside Calvin was just lying on his bed looking up at the ceiling daydreaming about Han and their time dancing outside in the lounge room till 6.30am. Dancing and holding onto her like a fragile piece of glass like there was no tomorrow. Her body fitted his in all the right places and their gentle swaying to the music made out they were the only ones left in the world. Awoken by Hannah’s loud knocking Calvin went and opened the door to a frenzied Hannah collapsing into his arms, embracing him for dear life. “Calvin, I know what I want now” Hannah said running out of breath from dashing from one side of the house to the other. Pulling herself away from the hug just enough so that she could see Calvin’s confused face. “I want y-” Hannah collapsed before she finished her sentence. Fortunately Calvin was holding onto her before she fell to the floor “Hannah!” "OMG! Hannah!" yells Calvin. Calvin sat on the floor and held Hannah in hs arms. "Hannah, what's wrong? What's happened?" yells Calvin. Stacey heard Calvin's yelling and ran straight to him. She saw Hannah, in Calvin's arms on the floor. "OMG! What's happened?!" yells Stacey. "I dunno, she ran up to me and she started to say something, then she collapsed!" Calvin yells back. At this point Calvin was in tears and Stacey was just about to start. Calvin carried Hannah downstairs to the lounge room and layed(sp?) her down on the couch. He sat on the floor staring at his dear little Hannah. Stacey went and got Sally and brought her to the lounge room. Sally felt Hannah's pulse and checked her breathing, everything seemed to be fine. Five minutes later, Hannah started to develope a fever. Stacey got a wet towel and put it on Hannah's forehead to cool her down. Sally took Hannah down to the hospital. Calvin insisted that he could come too. The doctor went in and had a look at Hannah and felt her burning forehead... (sorry if it's rubbish but i couldn't think of anything else.)
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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 28, 2003 5:30:48 GMT -5
i added, so can someone else please add?
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Post by x0 jazzeh on Sept 28, 2003 20:05:47 GMT -5
HULLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOO! ne one gonna add?
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Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Sept 29, 2003 15:45:14 GMT -5
Sorri!!!!! i haven;t been on in alittle while...lol like a day but yah okay okay ill add im very good but ill do it anyway..lol mandi to the resue!!! don don da don!! "this girl is devolping the flu" the doctor said in a deep voice looking back at sallys worried face "shesgonna be arlgiht, jsut tkae her home adn elt her rest and in a few days she will be up and walking" with that he got a wheelchair and an hour alter hannah was back at home in the bed with calvin by her side............. okay enough with hannah and calvin in cying to kno whats gonna happen with aaron and fnrakie....oh ayh im making this section of the fanfic so i can have ANYTHING happen...muahahahahahahahahahahahah Aaron was standing downstairs, jsut staring into nowhere.....a few minutes ago he heard frankie crying as she ran up stairs than a slam of the door and than silence. Aaron was confused, he didn't kno what to do, he lvoed frankie sooo much and couldne't even think bout hurting her "than why did i kiss daisy" he yelled out loud than he heard a sqeak of the floor behind him na dhe twilered around and there was Stacey wit her hair poking out from the side of the door. "gigs up stacey, i can see ur hair" aaron sighed than turned back around "oh aaron, i didn't eman to eavdrop but but"she muttered "you kissed daisy, how could you hurt fnrakie like that, no ownder shes mad at yah" she spoke out than sat down beside azza and put her arm round him "daisy kissed me, i jsut didn't ahve enough time to think to break away and than before i kne it frankie watched it all" he put his head in his hands " stacey i swear i never meant to hurt her like this...i....i...i love her stacey, truly do and i jsut want everything to be back to noraml, like why does daisy have to be sooo mad why can't she atleaast be happi" "daisy jsut has to realized that shes not bieng a very good mate by bieng angry at you and franxs, she jsut HAS to be happ for you too if she liesk it or not, come on lets go tlak to daisy, or fnrakie, we HAVE to settle this" stacey stood up grabbed aarons ahnds and pulled him to his feet nad elad him upstairs. Meanwhile Back in the past just after frankie sllamed the gurls door shut and ran onto staceys bed to cry she heard a noise, looked up and saw daisy sitting in a chair starring at her....... (lets make daisy be nice, shes not mean in real life, lets umm have her apolgize or sumthing!! lol) WHY CAN'T WE ALL JSUT BE FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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