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Post by calvinsbabe on Oct 12, 2003 7:19:48 GMT -5
sorry to make a ner thread on this but i posted the first chapter on the other one and sum1 else carried which i dont mind but i'd already wrote it and people keep asking me to reply so ive put up my original one. love rats
The clubbers had a week off and was spending it together on holiday in America. "wow look at the hotel its massive" shouted aaron getting excited. "i know, i wonder what its like inside" sed hannah. "so whos sharing rooms wiv who" asked a confused frankie Aaron:"why dont we just pull our names out of a hat or something" so the guys wrote the names out and put them in a hat, and each pulled a name out each. Rochelle: ok we will go in order starting wiv frankie, then hannah and so on. Frankie: ok i got jay Hannah: ok i got..Stacey, so ull be sharing a room, hannah sed giggling Stacey: well i got daisy Jay: im not telling you, jay sed sticking his tounge out at daisy, ok i got Rochelle Rochelle: phew its a girl Daisy: right i got Calvin Aaron: and Calvin will be sharing wiv frankie. Aarons face dropped but decided to smile so they didnt notice he was jealous frankie was wiv Calvin. Calvin raised his eyebrow and smiled at frankie cos he quite liked her for some time Calvin: so that means Hannah and aaron will be sharing, Calvin sed winking at Aaron but he didnt seem to be too impressed. Calvin knew hannah liked aaron but calvin didnt know aaron liked frankie.
So all the guys went up to thier room and started to unpack. *in aaron and hannahs room* Aaron was laid on his bed in a daze. Hannah: Az r u ok Aaron: umm yeh why Hannah: nowt u just seem abit distant Aaron: sorry im just tired, im going to bed cya later Hannah:ok nite Hannah thought it was something to do with her.
* In Calvin and Frankie's room*
Calvin and frankie walk in the room and looked very stunned Frankie: where's my bed, frankie sed looking at the double bed Calvin: looks like were sharing, calvin sed wiv a big grin Frankie: what, thats wot u fink ur on the sofa, frankie sed laughing Calvin: u wanna bet. Calviin sed throwing her on the double bed after throwing each other around and tickerling each other Calvin landed on top of frankie, they both looked into each others eyes and leaned in and kissed when the door suddenly opend and sally( their chaporone) came in and looked gobbed smacked and sed........
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Post by calvinsbabe on Oct 12, 2003 7:20:42 GMT -5
Sally: what do u 2 think your doing, i can't let you have this room now. sally went rushing to rochelle and daisys room to get them 2 swop so calvin and frankie ad their own bed. Frankie: how embarrasing, she will think somethings going on between us now. frankie sed getting worked up. Calvin just looked confused he didn't know how to react to what Frankie just sed cause he thought there was something going on. Calvin: frankie calm down it's not that big of a deal, so wot we kissed. wots wrong wiv that we like each other don't we. Frankie: oh yeah its only a kiss, try telling sally that. Calvin: frankie u dint answer my question Frankie: oh Calvin not right now, ok.
Sally came back in to the room, with Daisy and Rochelle, Frankie looked gob smacked Sally: right you guys are swoping wiv daisy and rochelle and u can have the room wiv da 2 single beds sally sed as she tryed not to look at them both cause she was mad this upset frankie and she didn't want to speak to calvin anymore so she went to Hannah's room to talk to her while calvin went to thier room.
*Calvins point of view* i can't beleive the way frankie is reacting, I thought we were getting on fine and wen she kissed me i thought she liked me too. well i guess not, well ill show her, i'll just make her jealous then she's will no wots she missing.
*frankies p.o.v.* I can't believe me and cal kissed and sally caught us. I dont know what i was thinking when i kissed him, i thought i had feelings fro aaron but i dont know now, my mind is pretty messed up. I dont know how to tell calvin that there can't be anything more than that kiss, at least i don't think. I knlocked on Hannahs door, she let me in and told me 2 be quite coz az was asleep in bed.
(back to normal now)
Hannah: hey franx come through to the balcony then we can talk. hannah sed smiling at franx but then noticing she had red eyes and looked sad. Hannah: hey wats up franx Frankie then burst out in tears and hannah hugged her. Hannah:wats rong Frankie: well me and calvin were play fighting and we were on our double bed and we were on top of each other and we started to kiss Hannah: oh thats good rite. Hannah sed unsure. Franx:no coz sally walked in and got mad and shouted and made us swop rooms wiv daisy and rochelle. ive never been so embarressed in my life. and the worst thing is calvin thinks theres summat between us but i dont think there is because i fink i like sum 1 else better but i dont know. frankie sed crying more. Hannah: so who is he ova guy
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 12, 2003 8:42:44 GMT -5
great fic! pls post more soon!
alitha xoxox
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Post by calvinsbabe on Oct 12, 2003 9:38:57 GMT -5
thanx. ;D Frankie: oh never mind its not important. sed frankie trying to change the subject Hannah: oh ok, maybe another time. Frankie: yeah. Hannah do you mind if i have a nap on your bed please, its just i dont feel like facing calvin yet. Hannah: yeah course it is, ill go and check daisy and rochelles room out. sed hannah leaving the room excited. Frankie laid on top of hannahs bed looking at Aaron. Aaron suddenly opend his eyes and looked at Frankie and sed: Aaron: hey, wot u doing in here Frankie: hi, hannah sed i could have a nap on her bed Aaron: why? Frankie: erm..cos..er my room isnt ready yet. frankie sed trying to lie. Aaron: oh ok then. and he smiled at her. Frankie: its cold in here aint it? Aaron thought to himself this is my chance to get close to frankie. Aaron: i no, come here and cuddle up wiv me. Aaron sed wiv a smile on his face Frankie: erm..no i ill be ok. frankie then looked at aaron and saw that he looked sad, the reason she sed no was cause of the situation wiv calvin and if sally saw them what wud she think. but cos of the look on aarons face frankie sed: Frankie: oh why not. she sed smiling. So frankie got on aarons bed with him and they cuddled into each other in the sthingy position and both fell asleep wiv smiles on thier faces.
*Down Stairs*
Every one except frankie and aaron was downstairs in the lobby where they had planned to meet, they were all waiting for the two to come down. Calvin hadn't seen frankie since she went off earlier so was worrried about her so he went up to hannah and sed: Calvin: hey hannah can i talk 2 u in private a minute please. Hannah: yeah sure you can Calvin: have you seen Frankie within the last hour Hannah: yeah Calvin: oh right, is she ok, where is she now. Calvin sed panicking Hannah: calvin calm down shes fine shes having a nap on my bed. if you want ill take you up, so u can make sure shes ok Calvin: plz thanx so much, ur a good friend. Calvin hugged hannah, which made her blush and they both walked up to her room, and hannah opend the dorr and they both went in and stood there in amazement, and shock. hannah's eyes started to fill up and calvin went red wiv anger and stormed out and hannah followed him.
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 12, 2003 9:51:40 GMT -5
great! love it! update please?!?!?!?
alitha xoxox
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Post by Aaronsheart on Oct 13, 2003 10:22:34 GMT -5
Yay frankie n azza
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Post by calvinsbabe on Oct 13, 2003 10:22:38 GMT -5
Hannah followed Calvin to his room and tried to calm him down even though she was still upset herself. Hannah: Calvin, calm down it might not be what it looks. hannah sed hoping that was the reason Calvin: you no aswell as i do there must be. i dont go and cuddle you or the others like that, especailly asleep. Hannah: i suppose, we better go bk downstairs to the others. Calvin:yeah, but dont mention anything will you. Calvin sed now wiv tears in his eyes. Hannah got up and went over to him and cuddled him and sed "no i wont" . Calvin sat and hugged hannah for a while he suddenly looked up at her and both stared in each others eyes for a while and leaned in getting closer and closer when calvin sed calvin: are you sure. he wisperd Hannah: Yeah Calvin and hannah then leaned in more and started to kiss. After a while Hannah broke off and sed Hannah: we beter go down, ill meet you there, cya. sed hannah rushing out of the door. Calvin: erm ok then. Calvin just sat on his bed wiv his head in his hands and was thinking what is it wiv me, wen i kiss a girl they rush out, whats rong wiv me.
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Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Oct 13, 2003 10:22:46 GMT -5
ooh thats kool, plz more!!
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 13, 2003 10:25:19 GMT -5
*chants* post more post more!
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Post by Aaronsheart on Oct 13, 2003 10:28:19 GMT -5
Yay n now cal n hannah(anyway)calvinsbabe i didnt know that u wanted 2 do the fanfic alone so thats y i continued anyway u should ve told me then i would ve deleted:)anyway keep it up nice fanfic
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Post by calvinsbabe on Oct 14, 2003 15:53:17 GMT -5
its ok i thought yours was good so i thought i wud carry it on in another one. so heres da nxt part any way. After a while he went downstairs when he got down every was at the table including frankie and aaron. frankie gave Calvin a weak smile then looked away, calvin just ignored it and tried to stay calm. There was a seat next to frankie and another one next to Daisy so he went and sat next to Daisy, which made frankie abit uncompfortable. Aaron went and sat in the seat left next to frankie, and hannah just looked at calvin a smiled to let him no shes there for him. When they had eaten their main course calvin excused himself from the table Sally: dont you want pudding Calvin: no thanxs Sally: were going out after dinner are you comming with us Calvin: no im just going to my room, cya later. With that calvin walked to his room After dinner frankie went up to her room to change cos they were going out wen frankie opend the door she saw calvin laid on her bed as soon he saw her he jumped off and got into his bed. Frankie: Calvin can i talk to you plz Calvin: you already are aren't you. Calvin sed slightly snapping Frankie: well, i think we need to talk about what happend earlier today. frankie sed as she sat on the end of his bed. Calvin: ok then. he sed rising up and looking at her Frankie: well im sorry for the way I reacted, i know i shouldn't of gone mad its just i was confused. I didn't know i had feelings for you and... Calvin: what, you mean you had feelings towards me. Calvin moving sligtly and starting to smile.
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 29, 2003 7:39:22 GMT -5
post more please?!!?!!?!!
its really good!
alitha xxoxo
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Oct 30, 2003 2:48:13 GMT -5
yay post post a.s.a.p
lotsa luv
em xoxo
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Post by Tasha on Nov 1, 2003 10:07:31 GMT -5
please please please do more
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Post by sami on Nov 1, 2003 10:21:51 GMT -5
calvin's a confused one
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