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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 29, 2003 13:22:01 GMT -5
Ok, me (Dee) and Lou are gonna share this fan fiction, so hopefully you guys will like it
Chapter 1
Calvin sat on the chair looking down at his legs. He never liked the denists, never liked the idea of some guy shoving his fingers in your mouth. He looked around the white room. Pictures of happy looking teeth and little kids and grown adults showing off there perfect teeth. The door opened and Calvin's heart began to race. The denist came in he had a white labortary coat on and was in his 40s.
Calvin smiled at the denist. "So, what's your name and what are we getting done today," asked the denist. "Well, em, Calvin and i'm here to get a check up," said Calvin with a quivering voice. "Don't worry, you're safe. Ok then let's get this over and done with," smiled the denist.
Calvin lied back on the chair and opened his mouth wide. He heared the snap of the denist glove and he closed his eyes with the fear. He could feel the denist hand in his mouth and he didn't like the feeling. Calvin heard the denist making sounds like; "Hum", and "ah," which didn't calm his nerves.
"Well, Calvin," said the denist. Calvin opened his eyes and looked at the denist. "It seems that you might need braces," said the denist. "Braces?" asked Calvin again. "Yep, but most probably, we'll get you a rentainer for the night time," said the denist trying to comfort Calvin. Calvin nodded polietly put deep inside him he was petrified. "So, we'll get your chaphorone in here, so we can arrange another appointment," smiled the denist.
Calvin became very annoyed. He didn't want braces or a retainer. This could all trial back to Halloween and Jay's party. 2 days of sweets which truely destroyed his teeth.
I'll let Lou write sum more!!! Hope you like it so far.
Dee!!!
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Oct 29, 2003 13:43:42 GMT -5
tut, blame jay lol
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loulou170388
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Post by loulou170388 on Oct 29, 2003 15:52:53 GMT -5
When he got home, there seemed to be nobody around, it was all really quiet.
Cal poked his head round the living room door, and Daze was sitting by the window, tears running down her face, a tissue in her hand. She quickly wiped them away when Cal came in.
"what's wrong?" he said walking over to her. "Nothing" she said wiping her tears away.
"Cum on Daze it must be sumin, plz tell me?" he put his arm round her.
"Well..." she began.
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*~Dee~*
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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 29, 2003 16:16:11 GMT -5
"It's Aaron," replied Daisy as she reached for another tissue. "What did her do this time," asked Calvin holding the tissue box for Daisy. "Nothing much," sobbed Daisy. "He had to do something, Daze," smiled Calvin. "He just said something, it doesn't matter," smiled Dasiy getting up. Calvin smiled and stood up beside her. "Oh,how did the denist go?" asked Dasiy. "I have to get braces," whispered Calvin. "What?" asked Daisy. "I have to get braces," said Calvin through his teeth.
Your turn Lou!
Dee!!!
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loulou170388
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Post by loulou170388 on Oct 29, 2003 16:41:33 GMT -5
Daisy wrote in her diary...
Arrrgh i am soo sick of aaron, i cant believe he did it again.......
she left her room with the diary open, just as Roch n Frank walked in...
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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 29, 2003 16:55:45 GMT -5
Rochelle ran oner to Daisy's diary.
"Uw, look," smiled Rochelle as she started flicking through the pages of her diary. "Roch, we shouldn't be reading that," said Frankie as she strolled over to Daisy's bed.
"Frankie's goign through my head, she thinks she's so great," quoted Rochelle. "She wrote that," whispered Frankie to Rochelle as she looked into the diary with Rochelle.
They looked through the diary reading Daisy's deepest secrets. As they came to the entry Daisy put in earlir, Daisy came in with a drink in her hand.
As she saw Frankie and Rochelle, she dropped her glass and ran over to her bed. Frankie and Rochelle ran out of the room giggling. Daisy looked around and grabbed her diary.
She hid it her hiding place. Underneath her matress.
Your turn Lou and actually make it long this time!
Dee!!!
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Post by loulou170388 on Oct 29, 2003 17:41:56 GMT -5
Tears ran down Daisy's face.
' I can't believe they write that' she thought to herself.
she cried harder and didnt know what to do.
' They are gonna know everyfing' she cried. As she did Stace walked in.
"Whats up Daze" she said going over and giving her a hug.
"Fran n Roch read my diary, they know everything" she sobbed.
"Omg did they really do that?" asked Stace shocked.
"Yes" Daze nodded.
" I cant believe it, i will go talk to em". she said hugging Daze and leaving the room.
"Fran, Roch, can i have a word plz?"
"Yup" they said.
"In Private" Stace said again.
"Oh" they said getting up and going to the Kitchen.
"Did you read Daze's diary? she is very upset about it".
Frankie and Roch looked sorry. "I cant beleive she said i think i am so great" Frankie sighed. "Frankie!! she Didn't say that bit!! I just said that to get you to cum look at it!"
"Oh" said Frankie. "I feel really gulity for larfin shall we go say sorry?"
Stace stared at them hard. " She's very upset, and i mean VERY so you better be very sorry" she said sternly.
"Ok" they said going up to see Daze. Daze was lying on her bed, crying.
"Daze, we are sorry, we didnt mean to read it, or laugh, sorry" Rochelle said.
"Yer we are" Frankie agreed hugging Daisy.
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Post by loulou170388 on Oct 29, 2003 17:46:33 GMT -5
"It's too late. You know too much" she cried.
She ran to the bathroom, slamming the door.
She cried harder and harder. 'Just how much did they know' she thought.
There was a knock at the door.
"Daze we are very sorry, we didnt see much anywayz, plz forgive us"
"Daisy please, dont be like dis" Roch said.
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*~Dee~*
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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 29, 2003 18:18:38 GMT -5
Daisy sat on the toilet with a piece of loo roll in her hand. She wiped her eye and began to think to herself. "Why am i being to silly about Aaron? He's my friend. What's up with me lately," she wondered.
Meanwhile, Calvin walked past Daisy room with Rochelle and Frankie banging on the door.
"What's going on," asked Calvin. "Daisy thinks we read all of her diary," said Frankie. Calvin looked at Frankie. "Ok, ok, we read some, but just i'm so happy, blah, blah, blah," said Frankie. "Daze, come on. Open up," yelled Rochelle through the door. "Hold on, Daze come on it's me Cal," yelled Calvin.
The door slightly opened and Dasiy face came out. "Calvin, only you can come in," said Daisy.
Calvin walked into the bathroom. Daisy was sitting on the toilet.
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 29, 2003 22:52:16 GMT -5
this is a cool fic! please post more asap!
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Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Oct 29, 2003 22:58:53 GMT -5
ooh great job guys!! what did aaron do!!??/ lol iwnna kno!
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Post by Clara on Oct 29, 2003 23:03:15 GMT -5
Oooo..yah what did Aaron do!? Update more please! awesome job!! Clara
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Post by *~Leila on Oct 29, 2003 23:12:39 GMT -5
awesome!! ;D update more pweese Luv, Leila
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Post by sami on Oct 30, 2003 1:32:44 GMT -5
calvin to comfort daisy? AWWWW!
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loulou170388
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Post by loulou170388 on Oct 30, 2003 4:52:48 GMT -5
Calvin hugged her tightly.
"Shh its alrite Daze, they only read the good bits" he said.
"But Cal, u dont undertsand, i need to know exactly what it said"
"Ok, well you three go and have a private chat in the bedroom and i will make sure no1 from downstairs comes up ok?" he said hugging her.
"Aww thnx Cal ur the best" she said kissing his cheek.
* in Their room *
"What did u read then?" said Daze quietly, not looking Roch and Frankie in the eye.
"Just months back when you were saying how happy you were" Frankie said.
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