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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 13, 2003 10:05:14 GMT -5
Hiya, this is my 1st fan fic, so plz tell me wot u think ![](http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/otn/funny/jump3.gif) "I really want Calvin 2 hurry up & get bck from his holiday i miss him so much" Hannah Complained. "Awwwwww, dont worry Hanny, he'll be home in 1 week" Daisy said, trying to help. "But 1 week is far 2 long, i can't go that long without being with him" "Yeah u can!" Frankie said. "Easy 4 u 2 say, Aaron's here for u!"Hannah shot bck,"Ok ok, dont' bite ma head off, i woz only trying to help!" Calvin woz on holiday with his parent 4 2 weeks and the 1st week was already gone, but Hannah couldn't go another week without seeing him. "Come on, y don't we go out shopping?" Stacey said trying to cheer Hannah up, "No no! i can't do that, what if Calv tries to fone??," "He won't he doesnt' fone till 8pm", "Fine then" Hannah agreed "But if he does fone, and i'm not in, it' will be all ur fault!!! Hannah said sarcasticly. "So what shop should we go in2 1st?" Frankie asked, "Hannah?" Stacey asked "Erm.......i don't mind" She replyed, "Oh, can we go in2 New Look i saw a gorgeous lovely top in there 2 weeks ago, and i really wanna buy it" Daisy said, enthusiastically. "Sure" Hannah said, and all the girls walked in2 the shop. "What do u wanna do?" Aaron asked Jay, "I dunno, maybe we should txt Calv ask him what he's done 2day?!" Jay suggested, "Ok then but we're using ur fone" "K then" Jay went and got his fone. So wot should i say?" "Say, hiya Calv, how r u? we're havin fun without u! j/k, wot have u been up 2? r u enjoying urself? speak 2 u 2nite when u fone!!! c ya, do u think that's ok?" Aaron asked Jay, who woz frantically tryin to type all this in2 his fone. "There done, yeah that sounds ok, there we go, it's sent!" Then the 2 boys just sat there trying 2 think of somethin 2 do. luv Dawn xxx
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 13, 2003 10:07:18 GMT -5
Btw its' not finnished, i'm gonna keep addin 2 it, but plz tell me wot u think of the start? ![:o](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/shocked.png) luv Dawn xxx
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Post by Hana~boo on Sept 13, 2003 10:09:03 GMT -5
oooo its really good Dawn..pls post more ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) Hana xxxx
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Post by TishaGoldspink on Sept 13, 2003 10:10:13 GMT -5
Oh thats wicked Dawn ur a real good Fan Fic writer, please post sum more.
Luv Tisha x
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 13, 2003 10:33:25 GMT -5
Thanx guys ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) here's the next part The girls where trapesing around the shopping center, after it seemed like they had been in every shop!, "Can we just go home now?" Hannah asked, "I'm really tired" "Yeah sure we can, that alright with u guys?" Frankie asked "Yeah sure, they said in unison" "K then lest go" Frankie said, and they headed for there private bus (oooooo lucky eh?). They got in and once every1 was settled down in there seats, the bus started to move, and they headed for home. "I'm gonna go watch some tv, u coming?" Jay asked Aaron, "Yeah ok then" and the both of them sat down and started to flick throught the channels to see if there was anything on.....then suddlenly *beep beep* "Oh it's ma fone" Jay shouted, with excitement "It must be Calv" he said and it woz txt = Hiya guys, i'm havin a gr8 time here in Tenerife, it's boiling hot! and i've got a tan, and u guys better b missin me! or else, lol, tell Hannah i miss her soooooo much! and i luv her, and tell alll the girls i said hi, oh well i'll tok 2 u 2nite, c yaz! end of txt. "Ok then i guess he's havin fun!" Aaron said, "Yeah and we're stuck here bein bored!" Jay complained "Oh i luv this new skirt, it's amazing" Frankie said with delight as she looked at her brand new denim skirt she got from Tammy, it's just so kewl, Hannah do u like it?" Frankie asked "Yeah it's....it's gr8" Hannah replyed "Hannah, wot's up? r u ok?" Daisy asked, and then she noticed that Hannah woz cryin...... luv Dawn xxx
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Post by ~¤~Cuddles~¤~ on Sept 13, 2003 10:40:38 GMT -5
awwww.. its so great... ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) Poor Hannah.. Wonder why shes crying ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/sad.png) Update asap ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) Luv, Han
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Post by ~*Jenny Jenn Jenn*~ on Sept 13, 2003 11:24:15 GMT -5
its great Dawn ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) -Jenn ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif)
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 13, 2003 12:28:07 GMT -5
Thankooooooooooo ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) "Hannah?!?!, wot's wrong?" Daisy askes worried, "It doesn't matter, just leave me alone!" "But, Hannah we just wanna help," Frankie tries "I said leave it!!!" Hannah shouts, and turns away from them, "I think it's best if we just leave her" Rochelle suggests, and the rest of the girls nod in agreement. "I'm gonna go get somethin 2 eat" Jay says "K then" Aaron replies, then suddenly the door bursts open. "LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!" Hannah comes running in with tears streaming down her face "Hannah?!?!" Jay says, confused. "Wot happend?" Aaron asked "Well, we were coming home, and Hannah started crying on the bus, but she won't tell us wot's wrong" Rochelle explains "Oh!," Aaron says, "I think i'll go c her" "Good luck", Stacey says. Aaron runs up the stairs, and knocks on Hannah's door, "Hannah, r u ok? can i come in plz?" "No go away, just go away and leave me alone" "But......plz Hannah, tell me wot's wrong.....?, is it 2 do with Calv?" Aaron asks "Yes" Hannah replies "Is it that u miss him?" Aaron asks, and Hannah replies, "No, it's something worse" luv Dawn xxx
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Post by Bink on Sept 13, 2003 12:58:47 GMT -5
Keep going.
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 13, 2003 13:50:46 GMT -5
Ok ![](http://burns.thefinaldimension.org/contrib/geno/wink.gif) "Wi.......we....well, wot is it?" Aaron asked nervously, "Oh i can't tell, it might make it worse" Hannah explained, "no it wont" "U don't no that Aaron, u don't no wot's happend, and u can't help....." Just then Hannah noticed that all of clubbers had come upstairs and were standing there listening 2 wot she woz sayin "None of use can help, so just go away, and leave me alone"Hannah said, but Daisy stepped 4ward and said "Hannah, no i'm not goin anywhere i'm ur best m8 and i'm makin u tell me whether u like it or not" Hannah could tell that Daisy woz really worried so she said "Fine then, but just u!, come in here, and u guys plz i'm beggin u just leave me alone" Daisy entered and sat down on her bed (since Daisy and Hannah shared a room) "Ok, so wot is it? wot's happend" Daisy asked "Ok, well.......u no Calvin's been foning every night, well....that wozn't just to say hi, and he's not havin a gd time on holiday, he's just sayin that so we don't worry, well since a week b4 he left he woz receiving notes and txt's from some1 and he doesn't no who, but.........well...........they said "i'm gonna get u!!!" and "dont' try runnin i no where u r" and well......he doesn't have a clue who there from, and y he's gettin them, he's not done anythin, and he's not told any1 apart from me, and i'm here day after day, worrying about him and not knowing if i should say anythin to any1 coz well, this could be really serious, and i just want him bck here with me......" Hannah stopped and burst in2 tears again and Daisy sat there in shock. luv Dawn xxx
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 13, 2003 15:38:11 GMT -5
Wot do u guys think ![](http://216.40.249.192/s/ups/layla_phoenix/confused.gif) i'll write more l8r once u tell me if this is gd or not ![:)](http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/contrib/dvv/asthanos.gif) luv Dawn xxx
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Post by Hana~boo on Sept 13, 2003 15:48:40 GMT -5
WOW ![:-X](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/lipssealed.png) its reallly really good..i love the suspense..poor Calvin Hana xxx
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Post by ~¤~Cuddles~¤~ on Sept 13, 2003 15:52:12 GMT -5
Yeah its awesome Dawnie... Poor poor Calvin.. Luckyy he has Hannah ![](http://burns.thefinaldimension.org/contrib/geno/wink.gif) update asap! ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) Luv, Han
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 14, 2003 5:37:10 GMT -5
Ok, i'm gonna write somemore now! ![8-)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/cool.png) "Hannah, don't cry, plz don't cry" Daisy begged "i can't help it, i want Calv bck, wot if somethink happens to him?" "Nothing's gonna happen 2 him, it's probably just some stupid thingy playing stupid" (lol, soz ano that sounds weird)"Oh, i dunno wot i'm gonna do" Hannah cried and Daisy gave her best friend a big hug. "Wot do u think Hannah has told Daisy?" Rochelle wonders "I dunno, but it must be pretty bad, i can hear Hannah crying again" Frankie replies "Do u think we should go up?" Jay asks "No w8 for them 2 come down here." Frankie says, and the rest of the clubbers go and sit down in the living room, w8ing 4 they're 2 friends 2 cum downstairs. "Ok, well we need 2 get Calv 2 tell his parents" Daisy said "Yeah, but how?, he said he can't" "He can" Daisy replied, "We just need 2 get him 2" "Well, it's 7:30 the now he should be foning in about half an hour" Hannah told Daisy "Ok, then we tell him then, but i think it's best if every1 else no's" (e.g. Frankie, Aaron, Jay etc etc)"Right ok, but u tell them, not me plz" "K then i'll tell them" Daisy agreed, and the 2 of them walked down the stairs to a w8ing bunch of friends. luv Dawn xxx
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Post by ~¤~Cuddles~¤~ on Sept 14, 2003 7:38:05 GMT -5
It`s great... ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) more more more ![](http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/contrib/edoom/bounce2.gif) Luv, Han
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