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Post by Matt Frankies #1 fan on Sept 14, 2003 15:56:46 GMT -5
This is good Dawnie, keep up the good work. Yor fans are now pressuring for the next edition lol
Matt Frankies #1 fan
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Post by ~!i!*HaWaiiaNguRL*!i!~ on Sept 17, 2003 3:08:25 GMT -5
lol, cant wait 4 the next part! hehe
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Post by ~*~*Dawnie*~*~ on Sept 20, 2003 8:44:25 GMT -5
Ok, here's the next part guys, soz it's been ages Once Daisy and Hannah had come downstairs, all the rest of the clubbers gave Hannah a hug (she woz still cryin) "Ok so wot happend?" Jay asked "Daisy?" Hannah said, "Ok, i'll explain" and Daisy started 2 explain the whole story to the every1 else. Once she woz finnished the rest of the clubbers were all sitting there in shock, but then suddenly......bring! bring! the fone rang, "Oh that must be Calv" Hannah said i little nervous and excited (but not in a happy way) "Hello" Hannah said in2 the fone "Hiya sweetheart" it woz Hannah's mum "MUM!?!?!?" Hannah shouted in2 the reciever "now now, no need 2 shout" Hannah's mum replied, "Sorry didn't mean it" Hannah apoligised "It's just we're all w8ing 4 Calvin 2 fone, and we all really want 2 tok 2 him" "Oh, i c" said Hannah's mum a little disapointedly "I'm sorry, but i'll tok 2 u soon, ok?" Hannah said, trying 2 get off the fone "Ok, speak 2 u soon, bubi" Hannah's mum hung up and then the fone rang again 5 seconds l8r.......bring bring! Wot do u guys think? luv Dawn xxx
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Post by ~¤~Cuddles~¤~ on Sept 20, 2003 9:08:46 GMT -5
I think its grrreat you`re a grrreat fan fic writer.. keep up the verry good work:) Luv, Han
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Post by ~!i!*HaWaiiaNguRL*!i!~ on Sept 24, 2003 3:26:28 GMT -5
i think it was great!! hehe can u pleez post the next part soon? i cant wait 2 c what happens!
XOXO Christi
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Post by Tasha on Oct 28, 2003 6:03:24 GMT -5
MORE please do more ASAP
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