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Post by SClub8DazeFan on Oct 11, 2003 16:13:26 GMT -5
oh yeay! I wasn't sure when you were going to continue! Next time I'll have to post so you know people are reading it! it's really really good!
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 12, 2003 2:06:08 GMT -5
Jopey ;D I LOVE it..i always love your writing anyway It is sooo good...and of course people are reading it.i told you a hundred time  post more soon luv ya, Hana xxx |
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Post by Jopey on Oct 12, 2003 8:39:22 GMT -5
This is quite an important bit too! Oh and thanks 4 d compliments!
“Hi Lee,” I say smiling.
“You’re looking very nice tonight,” He compliments.
“Thanks,” I smile, I see Brad appear from behind his brother. Brad and Lee look very similar except Lee is one year older and Brad is a little shorter, Brad smiles at me slightly. He wasn’t dressed up – wearing jeans and a designer Nickelson top, his hair was spiked up as usual and he looked tall and lanky as ever, but he looks pretty cute I don’t know why but he just looks different.
“I’m going now mum, bye!” He shouts before coming out into the cold outdoors.
“Bye Chloe – have a good time!” Lee shouts as me and Brad head towards our car.
“You look really nice,” Brad compliments me, I smile at him, “I like the twirly bits in your hair!” I chuckle slightly;
“Twirly bits!” I repeat laughing.
“Well you look nice anyway,” He says as I open the car door and climb in.
“Hi Christina,” Brad greets her as he climbs in next to me.
“Whatever,” She mumbles.
“Christina – be nice!” My mum snaps.
“Fine! Hello Bradley,” Christina says baring a false smile.
“It’s Brad,” I correct, she glares at me. After a silent car ride we all climb out and head off towards the party which was a streets walk away! When we get there the party has already started, Christina storms off to her friends and me and Brad head over to our group of friends who were all talking in the corner.
“Woah Chloe, you look gorgeous babe!” Ricky, one of the boys, compliments me I smile at him sweetly.
“Thanks,” I say.
“Yeh you do look really nice Chloe,” My mate Zoë agrees.
“So do you, I love that top – where’d you get it?” I ask her. After a while the parties in full swing and everyone seems to be having a good time, I’ve been dancing all night and soon I tear myself away from my mates and head to the toilets. On the way back I spot Christina on her own I walk over to her;
“Having a good time?” I ask her.
“Yeh, I’m just waiting for Josh,” She informs me.
“Do you go anywhere without him?” I ask Christina smiles and shakes her head. I laugh and head back over to my mates; the fast Sean Paul track is soon replaced with a slow Gareth Gates tune – one which I particularly dislike.
“Hey Chloe, wanna dance?” Ricky asks me.
“Sure, even though I can’t stand this song,” I smile wrapping my arms around his neck. I smile as we sway slightly, I look around the packed hall and my eyes skim across Brad who’s sitting on his own glaring at me and Ricky. I frown at him slightly but then continue dancing, but my eyes keep flicking back towards Brad and before I know it the song has finished. I quickly pull away from Ricky and start walking towards Brad; I take the seat next to him.
“Hiya, you alright?” I ask him smiling.
“Yeh,” He says sliding back onto his chair, “You and Ricky are getting close.”
“Yeh well he’s my mate and he’ll flirt with anything with two legs!” I remind him, “Why, are you getting jealous?” I ask raising a pencilled eyebrow.
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Post by Mernie on Oct 14, 2003 8:56:14 GMT -5
Jo,u gotta add more of this fic,it's SOOOOOOOOOOO good ;D
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Post by Jopey on Oct 14, 2003 11:07:14 GMT -5
“Maybe,” He says, “Anyway do you wanna come round tomorrow?”
“Yeh ok,” I say standing up, he remains seated.
“Come on Brad,” I urge, “Have some fun!”
“Alright,” He gives in jumping to his feet as I drag him over to the dance floor.
“Come on, loosen up!” I smile still holding onto his hands. When the party finishes it’s really late and pitch black outside, me and Brad look around for Christina. We find her in the entrance foyer, her and her friends were all crowded round talking and she was proudly sat on Josh’s lap.
“Christina, we’ve gotta go soon,” I say to her.
“Ok,” She says smiling.
“I’ll be waiting outside,” I inform her, she nods and I walk back to Brad. We both head outside where the air was extremely cold, we sat down on the side of the road and started talking.
“So did you have fun tonight?” I ask him, “Once you finally got up and danced!”
“Yeh it was good,” He smiles.
“I had fun, and I know Christina did,” I say rolling my eyes.
“Well as long as Josh was there she’d have fun!” Brad adds.
“That is too true,” I agree, “She gets everything.”
“What?”
“Christina,” I explain, “She gets everything, she’s great at sports and she doesn’t even have to try, she’s got a really nice boyfriend, all the boys fancy her and she’s probably the most popular girl in our year,” I explain, “She just gets everything, and what do I get?”
“You’ve got me,” Brad says smiling, I smile back at him.
“Christina has the perfect life,” I sigh with jealousy. Being twins you’re bound to get jealous of the other twin, it just seemed that Christina got everything.
“No she doesn’t,” Brad says, “She has narcolepsy, you are the one with the perfect life Chloe.”
“Brad, that doesn’t even make sense – my life is no where near perfect,” I reply.
“Well if your life is no where near perfect, then neither is Christina’s. Think about it Chloe you have a great group of mates, so we’re not the popular lot but we have a good time together, you’re really pretty – Chloe you’re a model for gods sake, and you have the perfect body. Now what is wrong with your life?” Brad says, it shocks me and I just frown at him.
“I don’t have a boyfriend,” I point out.
“That could all change soon,” Brad smiles.
“I suppose it could,” I say just as brad’s car pulls up, and Christina emerges from the hall. She quickly hugs one of her boy mates then we all pile into the silver people carrier and head for home.
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Post by Jopey on Oct 14, 2003 11:10:51 GMT -5
In the next part:
“So, he likes younger girls. Trust me Chlo – he fancies you,” Brad says, he breaks our eye contact, “And you fancy him.”
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Post by Bethany on Oct 14, 2003 11:41:10 GMT -5
how dare you steal my name for her?! loving it jopey loving it ;D |
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Post by Jopey on Oct 14, 2003 11:53:57 GMT -5
lol, thank uuuuuuuuuuu
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Post by SClub8DazeFan on Oct 14, 2003 19:55:00 GMT -5
this is such a cool story, I'm glad you've decided to share it! ;D
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 14, 2003 20:29:40 GMT -5
aww.. i love it..Jo add more..when the part you tol dme about on msn? is it the next one? ;D
Hana xxxx
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Post by Jopey on Oct 15, 2003 10:07:41 GMT -5
lol, no that bit don't come for a while!
“CHRISTINA!” I scream.
“What?” She shouts from the lounge.
“Where’s my pink bag?” I ask.
“The pink one’s mine, the blue bag is yours!” she argues.
“Fine, where’s my blue bag?” I ask.
“I’m borrowing it!” Christina replies.
“So you have the pink bag and the blue bag?” I say.
“Yep,” She shouts back, I run downstairs.
“Christina I need a bag, I was supposed to be round Brad’s house 10 minutes ago!” I say running my fingers through my thin hair.
“Oh,” She groans standing up, “Chill, there’s a black bag in the kitchen use that one.”
“Oh fine,” I say storming into the kitchen. Minutes later and I was knocking on Brad’s front door, his mum answered the door smiling at me.
“He’s upstairs Chloe,” She says I walk through and start walking up the stairs.
“Hiya Chlo!” Lee says from his room.
“Oh hi Lee,” I say taking a few steps into his massive room.
“So how’s you’re day been so far?” He asks.
“I’m still recovering from yesterday!” I giggle.
“So was it good?” He asks me smiling.
“Yeh it was really good,” I answer.
“I suppose Brad just sat in a corner for the whole time!” Lee predicts.
“I managed to get him to dance for a bit,” I reply proudly.
“That’s a first,” Lee snorts.
“Well, he can’t help it if he’s shy!” I defend Brad.
“I suppose you go for the shy, dancing sort of boys,” Lee says, I frown at him slightly.
“Not necessarily,” I say, smiling faintly.
“Listen Chlo, I’ve known you since you were born and I’ve never really thought about it but…”Lee starts, looking at his feet and shuffling them slightly however he’s interrupted by Brad waltzing into the room.
“Oh hi Chloe, I thought I heard your voice,” He says cheerfully smiling at me.
“Hiya Brad,” I say as our eyes meet.
“Brad, me and Chloe are talking,” Lee says through gritted teeth.
“Lee, Chloe came round to see me – come on Chlo,” Replied Brad grasping my arm.
“I’ll speak to you later Chlo,” Lee calls after me as I exit his room and head into Brad which was adjacent to his I walk inside and Brad slams the door shut.
“I knew he’d do that,” He says loudly making me jump slightly; I pull off my bag and place it onto Brad’s bed.
“Do what?” I ask.
“Lee, I knew he’d try it on with you,” Brad answers, “He fancies the pants off you.” I’m frozen in shock, Lee? As in year older, almost most popular boy in his year, totally gorgeous Lee? The one I used to play Barbie’s with when I was 4! I look at Brad, he’s now taken a seat on his computer chair and has his head leant against his hand, he’s green eyes are looking straight at me I loose my words and stare back at him. However, I quickly snap out of the trance;
“Huh?” I mumble.
“Lee fancies you, I don’t believe him everything I have he wants,” Brad complains, “What Lee wants, Lee gets.”
“Lee doesn’t fancy me,” I insist.
“Yes he does,” Brad argues.
“But I’m not even in his year,” I argue back.
“So, he likes younger girls. Trust me Chlo – he fancies you,” Brad says, he breaks our eye contact, “And you fancy him.”
“I didn’t say that!” I say my voice creeping higher than usual.
“It’s obvious Chlo, who wouldn’t fancy Lee – he’s popular, older and blonde,” Brad says his tone full of jealous. I’ve always known that Brad was jealous of his brother, he needn’t be though – Brad was popular and blonde! I think about it all, Lee is nice – he has a brilliant personality, who wouldn’t fancy him?
“Girls these days, they see a six-pack and beach blonde hair and they fall in love,” Brad stereotypes; this however pushes me over the edge.
“Brad, just because you’re jealous of your brother, don’t take it out on me,” I snap at him.
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Post by Mernie on Oct 15, 2003 13:08:09 GMT -5
ooh more more more,it's sooo good ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Jopey on Oct 16, 2003 10:15:01 GMT -5
“I’m not jealous of Lee!” Brad snaps.
“Well it sounds like you are,” I reply.
“I’m not jealous of him,” He insists, he sighs heavily, “I’m just jealous that you like him…and not me.” I look at the floor and blush slightly.
“Brad,” I start, “I, I don’t like Lee – honestly.” He looks up at me, trying to work out if I’m telling the truth or not I look him in the eyes and then look away again.
“I, I like you,” I admit, I bite my bottom lip. I shouldn’t have said that, I really shouldn’t have said that, after all I don’t even like him I mean come on – I don’t like Brad.
“Oh god,” I mumble, I pick up my bag and rush out of Brad’s room without glancing backwards. I was clutching my bag to my chest and heading down the stairs when I bumped into something hard which knocked me backwards and made me fall to the ground. I rubbed the spot where I’d hit my head and look up to see what I’d hit, I see Lee looking down at me.
“Sorry about that,” He apologises holding his hand out, I take it and he pulls me to my feet, “Why were you running anyway?”
“I just,” I start, “Said something I shouldn’t have.”
“What?” He asks.
“Don’t worry,” I say.
“Was it Brad? What did he do to you?” Lee asks a face full of concern.
“No it wasn’t Brad,” I insist.
“Don’t get all worked up about it Chlo,” He advises.
“You’re right,” I say, he pulls me into a tight embrace and I see Brad come out of his room, take one glance at us and then turn back round. I pull away from Lee and shoot a look at Brad; I then hurry down the stairs and out of their massive house, running all the way home.
“I’ve mucked it up Christina, I’ve mucked it all up,” I sob to my sister.
“No you haven’t Chloe, now what happened?” She asks me and I soon find myself explaining what had happened earlier, when I’d finished Christina tuts.
“Throw me a harder one next time, god Chlo I thought something serious had happened,” I stare at her, I could strangle her – I really could.
“It’s so easy – you’re supposed to be the smart twin Chloe!” Christina teases.
“Christina, just tell me what to do!” I say aggravated.
“Alright, keep your hair on! Well it’s so like totally obvious that you’ve totally fallen in love with Brad,” Christina says to me, I sigh. I’ve convinced myself that I haven’t fallen in love with him – he’s my best mate – no more!
“What about Lee?”
“He’s tempting but you don’t like him,” Christina assures me.
“So what am I gonna do?” I ask.
“I don’t know, you got yourself into this mess – you get yourself out of it!” Christina says harshly and she leaves the room.
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Post by SClub8DazeFan on Oct 16, 2003 20:23:11 GMT -5
I'm dying to know what happens! This is fab!
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 16, 2003 21:16:26 GMT -5
OMG..Jo is this sooooo good...please add more ;D
Hana xxx
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