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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 8, 2003 15:22:29 GMT -5
Hey, i wrote this fan fiction and i want to see wot you guys think about it ok then!
Chapter 1 All was packed as Calvin and Aaron stood at the door, waiting for Calvin's family to come and pick them up. Calvn had been away with his family for the past few days and his parents asked Calvin, if he wanted to invite Aaron on holidays with them. At these words Calvin leaped up and was on the telephone to an eestacitic Aaron, which brings us back up to starch. Hannah stood behind Aaron, half asleep, it was five a clock in the morning. "Han, go back to sleep," yawned Calvin. So, Hannah stumbled back into bed. Calvin yawned and lowered his head. There was a knock on the door and Calvin jumped up and answered the door, his little brother was at the door, with a huge grin on his face. "Come on guys," he giggled. The guys grabbed their bags and rushed to the car park. A taxi was outside, and the taxi driver grabbed Calvin and Aaron's bags and put them in boot and they were off to London Stanstead. As they were in queue to check-in they saw a group of girls looking over and whispering. Calvin and Aaron looked at each other and rolled their eyes. "Mum, we're going to the bathroom," Calvin told his mother. "Well then, take your brother," said his Mother pushing Jamie towards them. The three of them walked towards the bathroom and saw the group of girls walking towards them quickly. Calvin grabbed Jamie's hand and they rushed into the bathroom. "Safe," said Aaron. "God, I don't want anyone reconigsed us when we're in Gran Carnaria," said Calvin. "Yeah, I know," said Aaron, "It's nice and all, but come on, we just want to be normal again." Calvin, Aaron and Jamie came out of the bathroom and saw Calvin's parents outside. A anoccement filled the lobby and said; "All passengers of GR725, please make their way towards the gate!" "What's our flight number again, Dad," said Calvin. "GR725" replied his Dad. They all ran towards the gate and finally reached it. They all grabbed their broading pass and went to the plane. Calvin and Aaron were sitting together far from Calvin's parents. They sat back on their chairs, fastened their seatbeats, and were off to Gran Carnaria. Aaron grabbed his headphone's and started to listen to his iPod, while Calvin went to sleep. As they landed, Calvin looked out of the window. "Wow, Look Aaron," said Calvin. "Cool," gasped Aaron. As they collected their luggage, Aaron asked Calvin;"Do you want to get a girl, this holiday?" "I don't know, have I seen any cute girls yey!" replied Calvin. They got their luggage and got on the bus to bring them to their accomation. Finally they got to their accomation, Calvin and Aaron sat outside the recipition waiting for Calvin's parents to get the key to their apartment. Aaron close his eyes and opened them straight again because Calvin had nudged him. Calvin pointed to two girls by the phone, one was holding two drinks and the other was making a phone call. "So, which one do you like," asked Calvin. "I sorta like the one with the drinks," said Aaron, "But their both hot, so I would pick both." "Yeah," replied Calvin, "they are." The girl finished her phone call and was handed her drink back. They walked past the two guys and one of the girls, giggled and they walked on. Calvin's parents came out of the reciepition and handed Calvin and Aaron a key. "Why do we have the key," asked Calvin. "Because, there isn't enough space for us all to say together," replied Calvin's Dad. "Cool," saod Aaron. "So, can we go to our room now?" asked Calvin. "Yep, knock yourself out!" laughed Calvin's Mum. Calvin and Aaron grabbed their bags and ran to their room, with Calvin's family following. Calvin put in the key and opened the door to a small, airy, white room with a couch, kitchen and shelf. Calvin walked around the room and walked into the bedroom. "Aaron," shouted Calvin, "Come here!" Aaron rushed in and jumped on the bed closest to the door. "Mine!" shouted Aaron. Calvin laughed at Aaron and sat on the other bed. Someone knocked on the door and Calvin's family came in. "Wow!" gasped Jamie. Calvin's Mum's head popped into the bedroom door, "Calvin, we're going to our room and then we're going to get some food for here and our room. Want anything special?" she asked. "Tomato ketchup, please" said Aaron. "Ok, then," laughed Calvin's mum, "Ketchup and the esstinals! Ok, Bye" "Bye mum," said Calvin. "Bye, Mrs Goldspink" said Aaron, "Thanks!" As Calvin's family left the room, another knock came from the door. Aaron jumped up and Calvin ran into the bathroom to get changed into his swimming shorts.
I'll finish it later!! Hope you like it! I'll put the rest of it on after you tell me wot you think about it!!!
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Oct 9, 2003 1:54:43 GMT -5
thats really good keep on posting
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Post by FrenzyGal on Oct 12, 2003 9:04:30 GMT -5
ITS GREAT CANT WAIT TILL U POST MORE ;D
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 12, 2003 12:04:21 GMT -5
wow that is well good can't wait till you post some more.
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Post by Jopey on Oct 14, 2003 11:59:25 GMT -5
cool
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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 14, 2003 13:26:06 GMT -5
Here is the second part of my fan fiction!
Chapter 2 Aaron opened the door and Aaron's mouth dropped. The two girls who they saw early were at the door. "Hi," said one of the girls, "I'm Rachael and this is Sarah." "Hi!" said Sarah. Rachael had brown hair with streaks of pink and Sarah had Blond hair with bits of blue. "Oh, yeah, i'm Aaron and my friend in the bathroom name is Calvin," said Aaron. "Cool," said Rachael, "You coming to the pool?" "Yeah, we were just on our way," replied Aaron. Calvin came out of the bathroom and saw the two girls at the door. "Calv, this is Rachael and this is Sarah." said Aaron. "Hi," said the girls together. "Hey, Aaron?" said Rachael, "We're going to get changed, meet you here in about 5, 10 minutes, yeah?" "Alright," replied Aaron,"See ya later." The girls walked off to their room to get changed. Calvin looked around at Aaron leaning against the door. "How, When, Why," asked Calvin in a hurry. "Called at the door, When you were in the bathroom, they wanted to say hi!" replied Aaron smartely. Aaron turned around and got changed for the swimming pool. About 10 minuted later another knock came at the door and Calvin opening it. Rachael and Sarah stood at the door. "Coming," asked Sarah. "Yeah, just waiting for Aaron," said Calvin. "Cool!" grinned Rachael. Aaron came out of the bathroom and his month dropped, "Wow," said Aaron. Rachael was wearing a pink binkini top and pink shorts to match her streaks, while holding a inflatable ring, and Sarah was wearing a blue and green poka-dot biniki, with her hair up in a high pony tail, while holding a li-lo. "Where are you staying," asked Aaron. "Oh, we'll show you," laughed Sarah. They four of them left for the pool, and then suddenly stopped once they got out of the door. "There!" pointed Rachael, "My parents and my younger brother have another room, so me and Sarah got this room!" Their room was directly across the way to the guys. They continued to make their way to the pool, while talking. "So," asked Calvin, "Are you two sisters." Rachael and Sarah looked at each other and giggled. "Nope," giggled Sarah, "I came with Rachael's family!" "Me too," said Aaron, "I mean, I came with Calv's family." "Well then if we are going to call each other by nickname," said Rachael, "I'm Rach, Sarah, just Sarah or S" "Ok, then," said Calvin, "I'm Calv and Aaron's Azza." They finally reached the pool and the girls grabbed four deck chairs. "Az," shouted Rachael, "Give me your towels." Aaron came over and gave Rachael their towels, "I like that, Az," whispered Aaron. Rachael giggled and then Aaron picked her up and jumped into the pool with Rachael in his arms. Rachael came back up to surface and dunked Aaron under the water. Aaron came back up again and jumped to dunk Rachael, Rachael turned around and swam for the shallow end, with Aaron in hot pursuit. When they reached the shallow end, Aaron dunked Rachael, but when Rachael was underwater she grabbed Aaron's swimming shorts. Aaron jumped back and Rachael swam over to Sarah and Calvin. Aaron stood up and waded his way over to the others. Rachael laughed and hugged Aaron, "Sorry," said Rachael, "But you so needed it!" "Hey, do you want to play chicken?" asked Sarah. "What the hell is chicken," asked Calvin. "You don't know what chicken is?" said Rachael. "Right, anyway," explained Sarah, "Their will be two teams, and the girl must sit on the guys shoulders and try to knock the other girl off the other guys shoulders, it's that simple!" "Oh, alright," said Calvin, "I pick Rachael." "Ok, so I have Sarah," said Aaron. The girls jumped on the guys shoulders and started to play, Calvin and Rachael waded up to Sarah and Aaron and the girls started to push each other off and finally Sarah pushed Rachael so she lost her balance and fell. Calvin caught her before she hit the water and they gazed into each other eyes. As Calvin leaned over to kiss her, Rachael jumped out of Calvin's arms and dived underwater. Calvin swam over to Aaron, as the girls got out of the pool and lied on the deckchairs. "Hey Aaron," said Calvin as they threaded water in the shallow end, "That was wierd." "Yeah, I know," said Aaron, "She's really nice, but maybe she's just not the kiss and tell type." "Yeah, maybe," said Calvin, "Or maybe she has a boyfriend." Calvin's heart dropped as the taught if it was true. "Maybe," said Aaron, "Or maybe not, here what about of I ask her." "Would you?" asked Calvin. Aaron nodded and Calvin smiled and dived underwater. The girls lied back and Sarah asked, "What was that about, don't you like him," asked Sarah. Rachael sat up, "Yeah, I really do, but I don't know, it kinda has to be special," said Rachael. "But, he caught you and you were in his arms, that was so special," said Sarah. "I know, I know, I know," said Rachael, " I think I just freaked!" "Do you want me to talk to Calvin for you," asked Sarah, "Would you?" said Rachael. "Yep, under one condition," said Sarah, "You talk to Aaron for me!" "So, their is something going on?" laughed Rachael. Aaron walked over, and Sarah turned on her stomach. "Rachael," asked Aaron, "Can I talk to you for a sec?" "Sure," said Rachael, "Sarah, want anything, like a drink?" "Yeah, can you get me a diet coke, please." said Sarah. Rachael grabbed her wallet and Aaron and Rachael headed over to the drinks machine. "So what did you want to talk about?" asked Rachael as she put money into the machine. "Calvin," said Aaron, "He really likes you, and he's a bit confused about when he tried to kiss you" "To tell you the truth Aaron," said Rachael, "So am I! I do really like him, it's just I freaked out!" A couple of girls ran over to Aaron, "Oh my God," they shouted," Can we have your autograph?" They handed Aaron a piece of paper and a pen. Rachael looked at Aaron funny and then looked at Calvin. "Aaron and Calvin from S Club 8?" said Rachael trying to keep in the tears, "Why was I so blind, I knew who you were, but I just didn't want to believe it!" She grabbed the two cans and walked over to Sarah. She picked up her towel, her inflatable ring and grabbed the key. She walked back to her room, with a small tear sliding down her cheek. Calvin stood up straight and looked at Rachael leaving the pool area, he then looked at Sarah who was just as speechless, she grabbed her towel and li-lo and ran after Rachael. She smiled at Aaron and told him to call around later with Calvin. She continued to run after Rachael. Aaron turned around to Calvin who was sitting underwater.
Hope you like it! (it's not finished yet)
Dee!!!!
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Post by sami on Oct 18, 2003 1:59:24 GMT -5
more please!!
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Oct 18, 2003 3:43:49 GMT -5
yeah dat was gr8 plz add
lotsa luv
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 18, 2003 10:34:03 GMT -5
Oh this great add some more plz! ;D
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 26, 2003 6:26:25 GMT -5
OMG...this fan fic is reeeeeeally good and u haven't added ne fink 4 ages plz plz plz add sum more soon.
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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 26, 2003 13:04:26 GMT -5
Ok! Hold on!
Chapter 3 As Sarah reached their room, she looked back and saw Calvin and Aaron running after them, dripping from the wet. She went inside and looked around, she couldn't see anyone, but then she heard a sob from the bedroom. As she looked around the doorway, Rachael was lying on the bed crying into her pillow. Sarah sat down beside and rubbed her back, "You ok?" she asked. "No," said Rachael asked she sat up holding a small blue bear, "I rea-" A knock was at the door, "Rach?" shouted Aaron, "Are you ok?" Sarah mouthed, "Will I let him in?" and Rachael nodded and mouthed back, "But not Calvin!" "Yeah, Aaron, you can come in!" Sarah shouted back. Aaron strolled in and came into their bedroom. "Ah, Rach," Aaron sat on the other side of Rachael and gave her a big hug, "Are you pissed off that me and Calvin are in S Club 8?" Rachael looked at Aaron, her eyes were all bloodshot and watery, "No!" she said, "It's not that it's just, I really like Calvin, yeah." "Yeah, so," asked Aaron. "So, Calvin's going out with Hannah, and she's gorgoues and then look at me!" said Rachael. Aaron rolled his eyes, "Ok first, Rachael, you are just as gorgeous as Hannah, maybe even more so, and secondly, where did you hear that crap? Calvin is not going out with Hannah, he really likes you, and that it tottally gross, that's like me going out with Frankie or someone!" Rachael and Sarah looked at each other and then back at Aaron, "Again, no, that's gross!" said Aaron. "Ok," said Rachael, "Thanks so much, Az!" Rachael stood up and walkeed over to the bathroom. "Hey," Aaron jumped up and ran over to Rachael, "How about me, you, Sarah and Calvin go out and grabbed something to eat." "What, like a double date," asked Rachael. "Well, yeah," said Aaron, "You and Calvin and me and Sarah." "Ah, I thought something was something going on!" joked Rachael. "Very funny," laughed Aaron, "Ok then, I'll let you get to your shower!" "Ok then," laughed Rachael, "Bye!" Aaron waved back at Rachael and nodded and then winked. Rachael laughed and turned around to go have a shower. Sarah sat back on the bed and Aaron came in, Sarah sat up and before she could say anything, Aaron was kissing her. About a minute later, they stopped kissing, Aaron smiled at Sarah and Sarah looked down and smiled. "See you later," asked Aaron. "Ok, Cool," smiled Sarah. Aaron left their room and walked across the way to his and Calvin's room. Calvin was standing at the kitchen holding sweets, fizzy drinks and crisps. "This is the best day ever!" shouted Aaron. "Well," said Calvin, "What did she say?" "Well," started Aaron, "She was just upset 'cause she taught you were going out with Hannah!" "Really, you've got to be joking" asked Calvin, "So everythings ok, now, yeah?" "Yep," said Aaron while eating a sweet, "And me and you have dates tonight." "No way" Calvin came around and grabbed Aaron, "With Rachael and Sarah." Aaron nodded. Calvin jumped up and down in excitment. "And I kissed Sarah," smiled Aaron. "No way, Really, Cool!" said Calvin all at once. Calvin looked out off their room to Rachael and Sarah's room and saw Rachael walking around their room, she looked around and saw Calvin and waved at him. Calvin turned around to Aaron, who was searching the presses for the ketchup. "Beside where the plates are," Calvin told Aaron. Aaron opened the press and grabbed the ketchup, "Ah, I love you ketchup," said Aaron. Calvin laughed at him and Aaron just grinned back. Meanwhile, Rachael walked into her room and saw Sarah smiling to herself. "What happened?" Rachael asked, while looking through her clothes. "I kissed him!" said Sarah. "You what?!?" shouted Rachael dropping a blue string top. Rachael jumped onto Sarah's bed. "Was it good?" asked Rachael. "Yeah, it was" repiled Sarah. "You are so lucky," smiled Rachael, "I hope Calvin kisses me tonight" "Me too," said Sarah, "'Cause then i get all the juicy gossip!" The girls laughed, Sarah got yp and headed for the showera dn Rachael picked up her top off the ground and judged if it was suitable for tonight. Aaron was in the front room, spiking his hair, when Calvin came out of the bedroom. He was wearing a blue ready-creased shirt and dirty denim jeans, he had small gel in his hand. "Move over," said Calvin. Aaron looked at Calvin and moved a bit over to the right. Aaron was wearing a white striped shirt and blue jeans. "Done," said Aaron as he stood back and looked at his hair from loads of angels. Calvin looked at Aaron and grinned, he stood back aswell, "Well, is my hair ok?" asked Calvin. "Yep," said Aaron. Meanwhile, Rachael was sitting on the couch, waiting for Sarah to be ready. Rachael was wearing a pink one shoulder top and a white mini skirt, her hair was up with strands falling down. "Well?" asked Sarah as she came out of the bedroom. "Wow, you look great," said Rachael. Sarah was weaing a red top and pale blue jeans, her hair was down and showed off her eyes. "Tsh," said Sarah, "Look at you, I bet ya Calvin willbe all over you!" "Shut up!" shouted Rachael. As Calvin and Aaron came out of their room, Calvin ran off to his parents room, as Aaron walked across the way to the girls room. Aaron knocked at the door and Sarah answered it, "Wow," gasped Aaron. Sarah smiled and kissed Aaron. Rachael came to the door, "Where's Calvin?" she asked. "Oh, he's gone to his parents room ,to tell them he's going out with us!" "Ok, cool!" said Rachael. "You look great by the way," compleminted Aaron. "Thanks," smiled Rachael. Calvin came to the door, gasping for air. "Hi," said Rachael. Calvin looked up and his mouth dropped even more. "Hi," said Calvin still gasping for air. Calvin and Rachael came into the room, where Aaron and Sarah were sitting down on the couch holding hands. "Ok, i've an idea," said Rachael standing in the middle of the room, "What about instead of us, going out to eat, me and Calvin, go to the pizzaria and grab a pizza, so, like then, we won't get bothered by anone and we can eat it here, or your place." "That's a good idea," said Aaron, "Will me and Sarah so or you two?" "To be honest I don't mind," said Rachael, "What about you Calvin?" "Don't mind either!" said Calvin. "Ok," said Sarah as she stood up, "Me and Aaron will go get a pizza." "Ok!" said Aaron as he jumped up and held Sarah's hand again, "What do you want?" Rachael shrudded her shoulders, Calvin looked at Rachael and said, "Whatever expect anchoivis!" They all nodded together and Aaron and Sarah were off. Rachael looked around and walked into the kitchen. "What a drink," she asked. "Yeah," said Calvin as he sat down, "Do you have Coke?" Rachael turned around and nodded, she poured two glasses of Coke." She brought them over to Calvin and sat down beside him. "So," started Rachael, "Did Aaron tell you about him and Sarah kissing?" "Yeah," said Calvin. Rachael looked around and smiled at Calvin. "Cal-" said Rachael. Calvin had put his finger on Rachael lips. "Rach, listen," said Calvin, "I'm going to kiss you now and I don't care if you have a boyfriend or anything!" Rachael looked at Calvin and Calvin looked back. Calvin leaned over and kissed Rachael passionately. Rachael put her arms around Calvin and Calvin held Rachael closer. A big bang came from the door and Rachael and Calvin stopped kissing. "What was that," asked Rachael. "I don't have a clue," replied Calvin. They both stood up and Calvin grabbed Rachael's hand, they both looked outside and Sarah and Aaron were making out in front of the door, with the pizza on the ground. Rachael tipped Sarah's shoulder and Sarah stopped kissing Aaron. "Whoops," smiled Sarah. "Come on the two of you," laughed Calvin. The two couples walked inside the room, with Aaron holding the pizza.
I'll write the rest soon!!! Hope u like it!!!
Dee!!!
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 26, 2003 13:19:40 GMT -5
lol cool post sum more soon cos this fan fiction is really funny!!!
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Post by *~Dee~* on Oct 26, 2003 13:20:49 GMT -5
I'm gonna post sum more when i have more things from people!!
Dee!!!
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Post by loulou170388 on Oct 28, 2003 11:49:18 GMT -5
Add more soon, its wicked!
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Oct 29, 2003 6:11:18 GMT -5
YAY ADD MORE PALESE!!!
LOTSA LUV
EM XOXO
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