|
Post by Jopey on Oct 19, 2003 12:31:43 GMT -5
i just got this idea for a fan fic, it's just a spur of the moment thing! PLEASE tell me wot u think!
All was still in the small sleeping town of Whittle; a gust of wind blew past Daisy’s cold face, rustling the trees around her, shaking the pretty flowerbeds. Daisy’s piecing eyes scanned the dark, deserted street all was still and quiet except a faulty streetlight which was dimming then returning to normal at regular intervals. He was late. Daisy gave a quiet sigh and zipped her white, designer coat up further covering her thin lips, she slowly and reluctantly began walking towards a bench halfway along the road. She crunched the autumn leaves as she squashed them to the floor and shuffled along to the bench, she took a seat on the bench and crossed her legs; faded jeans covering her skinny, pale legs. After a pause of total silence there was a crunching of leaves, which didn’t come from Daisy she looked to the right to see a tall, bulky figure in the shadows. Daisy gasps slightly as the figure swooped towards her, covering her mouth, preventing her from screaming. “Don’t say a word,” A deep voice came, Daisy’s eyes were clasped shut and she nodded her head slightly, hoping that he would let go of her. Daisy’s body was full of trepidation as she let out a small gasp, why had she come out here so late at night? Why couldn’t they have met earlier? Daisy asked herself these questions over and over again even though she knew that answer – they couldn’t let their secret slip.
|
|
|
Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 19, 2003 12:41:59 GMT -5
Oh it's really good!!!
|
|
|
Post by Jopey on Oct 19, 2003 15:43:25 GMT -5
“I won’t hurt you if you say nothing,” The rough voice growled, Daisy gulped and nodded again as the man slid his hand around her neck and urged her to stand on her feet. Daisy stood up but her legs almost immediately gave way with the fright filling her body, the attacker held her up. “Oi! Leave her alone!” A loud voice screamed. Daisy turned her head to see her lover sprinting out of the shadows towards her; she gained a sudden sense of confidence and thrust her elbow powerfully into the attacker’s stomach. He gasped loudly and pulled away from Daisy, causing her to fall to the ground she saw her attacker double up gasping for breath. “Get out of here, go on – piss off!” Daisy's lover demanded having finally reached the scene; the attacker stumbled and then sprinted off, trying to protect his identity. “Daisy,” Daisy’s lover rapidly said rushing over to his lover and falling to his knees beside her, “Are you ok? What did he do?” “Nothing,” Daisy says shaking her head and panting, she felt like she’d just done 3 courses of cross-country, she sat up and straightened her back. “We have to tell the police,” Exclaimed Daisy’s lover. “We can’t,” Objects Daisy, now regaining her breath. “Why not?” “You know the questions they’ll ask – why I was out here, who I was with, who I was waiting for,” Daisy points out, “It would mean telling our secret.” “But Daze he could do it again…” He began, interrupted by Daisy. “It’s out of the question,” Daisy finalises.
|
|
|
Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 19, 2003 15:52:06 GMT -5
Oh wow this is really good i like this story it's like OMG wats gonna happen nxt...heheheh
|
|
|
Post by SClub8DazeFan on Oct 19, 2003 17:45:44 GMT -5
This is so good Jo! You're a great writer! I hope you continue this v. soon!
|
|
*~Leila
Chatterbox
Frankie&Calvin 4ever! lol
Posts: 151
|
Post by *~Leila on Oct 19, 2003 17:57:21 GMT -5
That's awesome!!! ;D
Luv, Leila
|
|
|
Post by Hana~boo on Oct 19, 2003 20:43:17 GMT -5
Hmmmm..i think i might have an idea who that lover might be ... Really great Jo..add more soon ;D Hana xxxx
|
|
|
Post by sami on Oct 19, 2003 21:41:22 GMT -5
you're a fab writer!!
|
|
|
Post by ~*Jenny Jenn Jenn*~ on Oct 19, 2003 22:15:11 GMT -5
it's great Jo good job!
|
|
~!Lilly!~
Chatterbox
S Club 8 CRAZY!!
Posts: 153
|
Post by ~!Lilly!~ on Oct 19, 2003 22:45:18 GMT -5
thats soo good!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!
Lilly xo
|
|
|
Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Oct 20, 2003 2:49:37 GMT -5
OOOO plz udpate soon dats fantastic
lotsa luv
em xoxo
|
|
|
Post by Jopey on Oct 20, 2003 14:39:23 GMT -5
ohhh ppl like it! wow! And hana - my lips are sealed!
“So do you guys all like being in a band together?” Fearne asks turning to the guests she was interviewing. It was live TV, if she slipped up she’s be humiliated and have to correct herself – in front of millions of viewers. But this was natural to her, it was what she lived to do and would continue to do, today she was interviewing one of her favourite bands to interview. They had turned up too early, looking tired and worn-out but still a sense of energy surrounded them, they’d surrendered to their big dressing room and returned hours later looking mature and ready for a long day of work. Professionally they all headed to the main stage, taking everything in their stride and getting slightly star-struck when coming across Triple 8. After a wait they were all ready to rehearse and performed their brilliant new single in style – you would never have believed that they could achieve this much potential in such a short time. “Yeh we’re all like best friends!” The wild one piped up, her out-of-control hair neatly pulled back into a pony tail. “We all immediately got on when we met so from then we’ve just been having fun and enjoying everything,” The young, blonde one piped up smiling her familiar smile and showing off her cute dimples. “So naturally a few of you are closer than others so who tend to get on better?” Fearne throws her next question at them, after a slight pause the youngest boy decides to explain. “Well we are all very close but naturally the girls stick with the girls and the boys stick with the boys,” He says, a permanent smile on his cute face. “Rochelle and I have always been really close because we’ve known each other for ages,” The older-looking, mature girl adds turning her sparkling eyes to the camera. “So as we already know you are all tutored do you enjoy it? And who is tutor’s pet?” Fearne asks, the group erupt into giggles. “Hannah,” They all say in unison as the camera scans over the young-looking, blonde girl who was smiling ever-so-innocently. “I don’t really enjoy tutoring that much cos I don’t enjoy school that much and tutoring’s no different really,” The petite, pretty, other blonde one says in her strong Essex accent which stood out from the others’. “No I don’t enjoy it either so me and Daze tend to like, copy each other’s homework and normally we get away with it,” Exclaims the heartthrob in his deep, masculine voice with a slight Scottish accent creeping into his voice. “Until now!” Daisy jokes, causing them all to chuckle a bit. “I quite enjoy the tutoring because I understand things better,” The smiling girl admits, also having a slight Essex accent receiving a nod from the oldest boy with spiked, black hair. “Alright everybody that was the almighty S Club 8!” Fearne finishes motioning her hands towards the young band who were receiving screams and applause from the crowd.
|
|
|
Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 20, 2003 15:35:36 GMT -5
Oh this is really good i love this fan fic. up date it soon!!
|
|
|
Post by SClub8DazeFan on Oct 20, 2003 15:39:57 GMT -5
aww! this is soooo good! I hope you update more soon!
|
|
|
Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Oct 20, 2003 15:57:05 GMT -5
ooh good job jo...ooh i think i kno who the "lover" is...its soooooo obvious keep goin!
|
|