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Post by Dazerock on Oct 20, 2003 17:34:37 GMT -5
Awesome!plz continue! ;D
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Post by sami on Oct 21, 2003 5:15:51 GMT -5
yay more asap!
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Post by Jopey on Oct 21, 2003 10:40:07 GMT -5
hmmm u think u know who her lover is? well u'll just have 2 see...
The town of Whittle was now alive with sounds, birds whistling in the evergreen trees, cars zooming up and down the semi-busy road and people venturing to the shops and back stopping to make casual conversation with neighbours. A metallic, blue people carrier sped down the road and indicated to turn into the biggest house along the street. The car pulled into the long drive and came to a stop, making the stones below crunch; the doors are ripped open and out climb 8 teenagers deep in discordant conversations. Their chaperone, Mary, walked towards the door opening it with her key and pushing the door open allowing the 8 teenagers to walk through to their large entrance hall. They each separated, going their own ways and would reunite later on when tutoring would start – a few hours of working hard, or staring into space in some cases.
Stacey shook Hannah; “We’ve got to get up,” Stacey mumbled her eyes still almost shut; Hannah groaned loudly and watched Stacey exit the room. Meanwhile Rochelle was having trouble waking up Daisy; “Daze, get up! Get up! DAISY GET UP!” Exclaimed Rochelle, as loud as was possible at 4 in the morning. “No,” Daisy mumbles rolling over. “I’ll get Jay to scream in your ear,” Rochelle threatens, giving up slightly. “Piss off,” Daisy mumbles inoffensively. “Just get up Daisy,” Rochelle shouts walking out of the room, Daisy moans and sits up slowly.
The tired youngsters were soon bundled into the people carrier where their driver, Pierre, was waiting for their arrival. They had a plane to catch in 3 hours which would transport them to France where they’d be doing the ‘Annual Paris Music Roadshow’. Then they had an awards ceremony the next night, they were all extremely excited about it all but did still not appreciate being awoken so early to get ready and get to the airport with time to spare. They arrive at the airport with hours to spare and all head inside to the warmth, Pat and Mary check them in sending the 8 of them to sit down on the airport chairs. They sat down in no particular order and sat in silence, all tired. Hannah was leaning her head on her hand, Jay was staring into space with Daisy’s head resting on his shoulder, Stacey and Frankie were checking out the shops, Calvin was almost asleep, Rochelle was reading a magazine and Aaron was fiddling with his mobile.
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Post by sami on Oct 21, 2003 22:06:48 GMT -5
yay awesome
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Post by Jopey on Oct 22, 2003 10:39:31 GMT -5
here's d next bit - there r a few clues in this bit!
Rochelle slumped onto her bed; it had been a long wait and an even longer flight. She toed off her comfy trainers and layed onto her back, she turned her head to face the other girls who all were looking as tired as she felt. Their connecting door swung open and Jay pounded through before any of the girls could argue, they were too tired to anyway. “We have to unpack as soon as we can,” Jay informs them jumping onto Stacey’s bed. “Gerrof,” Stacey mumbled pushing Jay’s back to get him off of her bed. “No,” Jay says firmly, poking his tongue out at her. Frankie stood up and walked over to her suitcase and began unpacking her suitcase, which contained half of her wardrobe. Daisy’s mobile began ringing, vibrating on her bedside cabinet; “Oooh its Daisy’s boyfriend!” Jay teased her; Daisy ignored him and looked at her phone to see her lover’s name flashing on the screen she smiled to herself, she answered the call. “Hello,” Daisy says. “Hiya babe, are you alright now?” Her lover’s deep voice comes making her mouth twitch, she refused to smile though – that would give it away. “Yeh I’m fine, I was a bit shaky but now I’m ok,” Daisy assures him. “Good,” His rough voice says, “You looked really cute this morning…”
After unpacking they all piled into the car and headed for the massive stadium where they would be rehearsing and performing later on in the evening. After a wait they’re shown through to their spacious, cold dressing room; “This is a dungeon not a dressing room!” Frankie says sarcastically gazing at the stone walls of the dressing room. “Look guys we can’t change the dressing room so let’s crack on,” Pat urges placing her big sports bag on the white table which was in the centre of the room. Daisy strides into the room, looking a bit flushed she puts her bag down and makes a disgusted face. “This is a dressing room?” She asks, Frankie nods reluctantly. “Where have you been?” Hannah asks curiously. “I just went looking for the toilets,” Daisy answers casually. Daisy slumped onto the sofa where Aaron was sitting she leant her head on his shoulder and groaned about being tired. “Have you all picked out your performance clothes?” Jodie, their stylist, asks not receiving any human reply from any of them, “Jay come and pick your clothes!” “Why?” Jay argues. “Cos you haven’t picked them yet,” Jodie says, Jay accepts and walks over to the rail of clothes. Calvin wandered through the door, straightening himself up and looking rather flushed – just like Daisy had been moments earlier. “Calvin where have you been?” Mary asks him patronisingly. “I was just,” Calvin pauses, “Talking to somebody.” “Who?” “This girl,” Calvin answers blandly. “What girl?” “A really nice girl,” Replies Calvin his eyes glancing around the room, looking for her - his eyes catch hers and they both glance away nervously. All eight of them get ready and are soon called to rehearsals – they’re performing two songs, ‘Love to the Limit’ and ‘Turn the Lights On’. They rehearse the two songs and are then told that it will be 3 hours until the show begins, making them all groan a bit knowing that tutoring would be coming up.
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 22, 2003 11:22:23 GMT -5
OMG..jo this is soooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD. plz post more soon plzz hehe ;D
Hana xxx
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Post by parsnipgirl on Oct 22, 2003 12:18:36 GMT -5
yeah!! its wicked!! plz add sum more soon!!
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 22, 2003 14:01:31 GMT -5
oh this is really good please write the nexy bit very soon!
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Post by Jopey on Oct 22, 2003 14:31:51 GMT -5
oh ppl like it! lol - with this next bit don't asssume things because it's not wot it's made out 2 be!
After an hour of tutoring and a short sleep they were all sent to hair and make-up again to get ready for the big show coming up. All the girls opted to wear skirts with the boys wearing casual clothes, after a long argument with her hair stylist Hannah finally decided to have her hair curled.
“S Club 8 you’re due backstage,” A helpful lady with a headset on informs them, they all head out of the door and follow her to the stage. After a few moments of cheering themselves up and getting ready for the performance they’re all asked to go to the side of the stage. They catch the end of Mis-Teeq’s performance, making a few of them dance along to the beat. Daisy and Stacey were biting their nails, as usual, and peering out to the audience to see thousands of people waving and screaming at Mis-Teeq. “I’m so nervous,” Daisy mumbles pulling her hand away form her mouth for the first time. “Don’t be – you’ll do fine,” Calvin, who happened to be standing next to her, assured her placing his hand on her shoulder. She smiled faintly at him before they were ushered onstage, Mis-Teeq left the stage and the 8 superstars ran onstage waving, full of energy – they briskly walk to their starting positions. The music begins and the performance started…
“Bye Daisy!” Daisy new found friend, Chloe, says as she heads out of the dressing room. “Oh bye Chloe!” Daisy says smiling and hugging her friend, Daisy put her hairbrush into her bag, tightened it and then slung it over her back. Soon she left the dressing room and clambered into the minibus, taking a seat next to Hannah. They both talked for a while as they ventured back to the hotel where they’d be sleeping tonight, Daisy pulled out her mobile phone.
Aaron was sitting at the front of the bus with Calvin; they were in deep conversation about the football game last night and the performance. “I think the performance was brilliant!” Calvin opinionates. “Tell you what there are some fit girls in France!” Aaron says watching a couple of pretty girls walk past. “Mmmm,” Calvin half-agrees not looking at the girls, and not interested. He feels his phone in his pocket vibrate and reaches for his phone, he looks down ‘1 MESSAGE RECEIVED’ – it was her!
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 22, 2003 14:37:56 GMT -5
Ooh this fan fic is really good i think i no who the lover is...heheheheh..it's sooooo obverious!!!
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Post by Jopey on Oct 22, 2003 14:47:53 GMT -5
well - it could all change!
ill add the next bit quite soon
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Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Oct 22, 2003 14:53:52 GMT -5
lol yah inko!! butthat would funni if it wans;t the erpson who we allllll thought it was, but it is by his siggy
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Post by Jopey on Oct 22, 2003 15:27:50 GMT -5
lol - well u neva no could have gone 4 a change!
The tall, lighted tower clock struck midnight and Daisy, once again, found herself waiting outside in the freezing cold. But she was not in the peaceful town of Whittle; she was in the middle of a busy French street which was buzzing with noises from the cars. She looked up the street to see her lover walking towards her she wraps her warm coat further round her; she walks towards him and embraces him. “Daisy it’s getting hard to keep this secret,” Her lover whispers in her ear. “During the day, I need to be with you, I need to touch you,” He continues. Daisy looks into her lover’s eyes; “We can’t risk it,” She says, shivering slightly. “I’ll try and hold myself back,” Her lover promises. “It’s not like we don’t do anything in the day, we managed to get away from them today,” Daisy reminds him. “But we gave it away a bit!” Her lover chuckles. “I think I love you Daisy,” Daisy’s lover says shyly. “I love you too…”
Hannah rolled over in her bed and turned to see Rochelle and Frankie sitting on Frankie’s bed and talking; she sat up and reached over for her hairbrush which was positioned on her bedside table. “No tutoring today Hannah!” Rochelle informs her smiling enthusiastically. “Cool,” Hannah croaks, she cleared her throat and repeated it a little louder. “We’re going to pick up our dresses for tonight as well,” Frankie adds, Hannah nods and climbs out of her bed. She looks round to see Stacey sitting outside on their balcony doing homework and Daisy still sleeping peacefully. “She’s still asleep,” Frankie says. “I don’t know why though, we were in bed really early last night,” Rochelle says frowning slightly. Hannah remained silent, she had heard somebody get up and walk out of the room last night. “She’s been mumbling in her sleep too,” Rochelle says just as Daisy turns over and mumbles another word. “No we can’t tell them,” Daisy mumbles, quiet clearly. “Oooohhhh this sounds like gossip!” Rochelle says enthusiastically, waiting for the gossip. “We can’t tell them our secret,” Daisy mumbles. Hannah gulp silently, she didn’t have a clue what Daisy was about to say but she had a feeling somewhere deep inside her that Daisy did not want anybody to know about this. “Don’t hurt me,” Daisy mumbles moving around in her sleep, as if trying to break free of somebody’s grip. “He’s late, why is he late?” Daisy asks herself, still asleep. Frankie and Rochelle were creeping forward trying there hardest to hear every word. “I love you…” Daisy begins; Hannah reaches forward and shakes Daisy gently before she can say anymore. Frankie and Rochelle glare at Hannah; “Why’d you do that?” Rochelle asks, demanding the answer. “She doesn’t want us to know,” Hannah says, she’d done the right thing. “Hannah,” Daisy mumbles opening her eyes slowly to look up at Hannah. “You were talking in your sleep,” Hannah tells her, Daisy nods and swallows. She clenches her face painfully; “I’ve got a sore throat,” She mumbles putting her hands around her neck. “I’ll go and get Mary,” Frankie says and she walks out of the room, Rochelle heads out to talk to Stacey. “Daze, is there something you’re keeping from me?” Hannah asks Daisy pauses and then shakes her head. “It’s just what you were saying in your sleep – it sounds like you’re keeping something for us all,” Hannah says, Daisy bites her lip. “I want to tell you Han but I don’t know where to start,” Daisy mumbles, her voice sounded sore and weak. Frankie bustled back into the room with Mary close behind, Mary thrust a glass of water into Daisy’s hand and passed her two white tablets – demanding that she take them.
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 22, 2003 15:43:59 GMT -5
Oh this is really good i'm loving this fan fic more and more, please post more jo it's really good i need to know who the lover is(i think i have an idea of who it is) plesase post some more soon!!! ;D
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 22, 2003 17:33:30 GMT -5
Jo..I love this..and im dying to know who it is..it better be who i think it is or we shall have a long chat young lady lol..j/k really good though..keep at it ;D
Hana xxx
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