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Post by ~*Jenny Jenn Jenn*~ on Oct 26, 2003 14:32:03 GMT -5
how bout her lover is Aaron but she likes Calvin lmao...i'm probably wrong ;D
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Post by Jopey on Oct 26, 2003 14:32:44 GMT -5
Ok then:
That night the clubbers were exhausted after all of the tutoring and dancing they’d done throughout the course of the long, gruelling day. Daisy decided to try to escape from it all and positioned herself outside in the garden staring up at the blue and cloudy sky. She sighed to herself, she had been so happy with him, so happy – they were perfect for each other so why did she like somebody else? Maybe she didn’t actually like him; maybe it was just a quick thought. Daisy sighed again. She knew it wasn’t just a thought – and if it was the thought had been stuck in her head for months. She groaned a bit and sat up, thrusting all of her thoughts to the back of her head. “Hiya babe,” She heard his voice, she sighed silently again and turned around to see her lover walking towards her. In a split second she had an important decision to make – whether to do what was probably right and would involve hurting nobody or to follow her heart. And as Daisy sat on the grass in the shade of the evergreen trees which swayed in the massive garden which was situated in the quiet, peaceful, friendly town of Willet she actually cast her thoughts to her. She decided that doing what was best for other people wasn’t as important as, for once, doing what was best for her and what would make her happy. Daisy thought through everything over and over again trying to make some sense of it all. Hannah’s advice ran through her mind ‘just do what will make you happy Daze’ – Hannah had said and when Daisy had refused telling Hannah that it would hurt him Hannah had told her to do something good for her for once. Little did Hannah know that those comments made Daisy do what she done next.
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Post by dAzEnCaLvFaN on Oct 26, 2003 14:50:41 GMT -5
how bout her lover is Aaron but she likes Calvin lmao...i'm probably wrong ;D yeah thats wat i was thinking... Jo: can't wait till ya post the next bit!!!
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Post by Jopey on Oct 26, 2003 15:53:37 GMT -5
Here it goes guys! This part tells u all u need 2 know, thank u for reading it! But don't stop reading now because there's alot more 2 be explained! Here it goes:
“We’ve got to talk,” Daisy says firmly, her lover doesn’t object he sits down beside her. “I don’t want to hurt you – that’s the last thing I want but it had to be said,” Daisy explains, “I think we should break up.” “What?” Her lover raises his voice. “It’s not you it’s me I’m all messed up, I like somebody else,” Daisy reveals. “WHAT? WHO?” He screams. “Don’t do this, just listen to me – it was stupid in the first place, meeting up at night and keeping it secret from everybody else. It wasn’t right,” Daisy insists. “Then why did you do it?” He asks her. “I don’t know but right now I’m wishing I hadn’t. And don’t you act the innocent, I know you’ve got someone back home who you like,” Daisy reveals, he is left speechless. “How do you know?” “I have my sources, now are you going to be civil about this all? Cos believe me Aaron things aren’t working as smoothly as we wanted them too.” “Daisy you’ve turned around and now you fancy someone else – am I not good enough for you?!” Aaron asks patronisingly. “No Aaron you’re not good enough for me – I deserve better,” Daisy says, “Cos for once in my life I’m actually doing what I want! Not what you want, not what my mate’s want – what I want! And I don’t want you!” “So who do you want then? Who’s this other boy?” Asks Aaron. “You don’t need to know,” Replies Daisy through gritted teeth. “It’s Calvin isn’t it, he doesn’t even like you Daisy he said that you get on his nerves and that you’re annoying,” Aaron lie nastily. “Shut up Aaron! Just shut up!” Daisy screams, tears welling in her eyes – why did he have to be like this? Why did he have to hurt her like this? Why couldn’t he just accept it and move on? Aaron leans over Daisy; “You’re pathetic Daisy,” He says. “Piss off Aaron!” Daisy says pushing him away; Aaron shakes his head and backs away from her before heading into the house. He stormed up to his room and threw himself onto the bed, he didn’t mean to be mean and upset her but he was upset. Daisy threw herself back onto the grass and wiped tears from her eyes, he may have been mean and upset her but at the end of the day letting go of him was not as easy as she’d hoped. Daisy scrunched her eyes up as she felt fresh tears forming in her already red eyes; she sniffed loudly and felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around to see Calvin kneeling beside her; she looks up at him with her eyes full of sorrow. Calvin looks down at her and hugs her tightly; “What’s wrong?” Calvin asks. “We broke up,” Daisy stutters, “We really broke up.”
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Post by Bethany on Oct 26, 2003 15:55:32 GMT -5
i knew it ;D i so had a feeling about that
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 26, 2003 16:00:16 GMT -5
wooohooooo *parties* good job Jenny Jenn *high five* i love this fanfic..really good Jo ;D
Hana xxx
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 26, 2003 16:07:50 GMT -5
awww poor everyone!!! d**n i was right in the first place! ahhhhhh! aaron and daisy! i luv your fic jopey its excellent!!! dont worry evry1 will still keep reading it! ahhhhh!
alitha xoxox
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Post by ~*Jenny Jenn Jenn*~ on Oct 26, 2003 16:27:45 GMT -5
wooohooooo *parties* good job Jenny Jenn *high five* i love this fanfic..really good Jo ;D Hana xxx *high fives bac* yay i got it right ;D more Jo more!
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Post by Kiwi on Oct 26, 2003 18:16:12 GMT -5
omg!! its so good, more mroe more!!! i knew it! Aaron and Daisy, hmm i wonder if their ne more surprises?
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Post by ~!Lilly!~ on Oct 26, 2003 21:57:27 GMT -5
ooooh, it was Aaron!...I knew that ...hehe.Yay! she likes Calvin! ;D ;D Can't wait for the next part!! Lilly xo
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Post by [___..:~*Sc8bAbE*~:..___] on Oct 27, 2003 2:40:02 GMT -5
YAY IKENW DAT!!!1 AND CALIVN AND DAZE YAY!!! YAY KEEP ON POSTING I NO I WILL STILL B READING IT!!!! O YEAH O YEAH GO JO GO JO LOL SOZ ALL HYPA RIGHT NOW
LOTSA LUV
EM XOXO
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Post by sami on Oct 27, 2003 7:34:56 GMT -5
AWESOME!!!! CALV AND DAZE!!! WOOHOOO!!!!!!!
i love you jo!! whoopee!
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Post by SClub8DazeFan on Oct 27, 2003 19:10:34 GMT -5
hip hip, hooray!!! ;D I LOVE this fic and that means you have to add more soon! Cause I said so. lol... nope, I'm not THAT mean...
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Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Oct 27, 2003 20:49:04 GMT -5
ooh lol!! i kne it was aaron tee hee ooh poor aaron, he's sjut soo upset! ill comfort you!! lol and daiy, shes sjut sooo ocnfused!
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Post by Jopey on Oct 28, 2003 5:16:53 GMT -5
thanx 4 all reading it! Here's the next bit:
“Who broke up?” Asks Calvin his arms still locked around her, Daisy remains silent. “Well why did you broke up?” Calvin asks, figuring that Daisy didn’t want to tell him who she’d broke up with. “Cos I thought I liked somebody else,” Daisy stutters,” And he was being horrible to me and I know he likes somebody back home coz his sister told me.” “And do you like somebody else?” Calvin asks, Daisy is silenced again. “I don’t know, I thought I did but I don’t know,” She answers. “Who is it?” Asks Calvin, Daisy wipes her eyes with the tissue and looks away from him. “You don’t wanna know,” She sighs. “Don’t you don’t wanna tell me?” “No,” Daisy corrects, “I mean you don’t wanna know.” “Ok,” Calvin nods. “I can’t believe we broke up,” Daisy shakes her head, pulls her self from Calvin’s arms and lies back onto the grass. “I can’t believe you two went out, why didn’t you tell me?” Calvin asks. “Cos I thought you’d be mad,” Daisy sniffs. “Daisy, why would I be mad?” Calvin says softly. “I don’t know I just thought…” Daisy begins, Calvin interrupts. “Daze you thought wrong, I don’t care that you and Aaron were together,” Calvin promises her. “But I just,” Daisy starts but she’s unable to finish the sentence. “Regret dumping him?” “No I don’t regret it I just…expected it to be easier,” Daisy admits. “You still have feelings for him in other words,” Calvin says glancing away from the worried Daisy. “No I don’t I just,” Daisy stutters, “I don’t know, he was just so horrible.” “He doesn’t mean it,” Calvin promises her pulling her back into a hug, “Sorry if I’ve been a complete c**t to you recently I’ve just had a problem.” “What?” Asks Daisy.
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