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Post by Hana~boo on Sept 19, 2003 7:54:47 GMT -5
I stare at the face from the window as warmth overwhelm me. "thats her" i whisper to my self as my eyes are fixed upon the smile she had on her face while talking to her mates. However my trance is cut with a jolt when the bus starts to move. i immediatly jump off my seat as if it was a reflex "WAIT..STOP THE BUS" I yell out rushing to the other end of the bus. I hear the passangers groan annoyed obviosly by me and the Bus driver isn't any better. "you're lucky i am a nice driver" he says sternly in his coraky voice as i step down to get off the bus I turn my head and look around .."where has she gone?" i ask myself. I can't find her she couldn't have just disappeared into thin air I panic as i look around again then my attention is grabbed by a few laughters i turn my head immediatly to the source of the sound and there she is infront of me "should i go talk to her or not" i repeat the question in my head...
Hana xxx
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Sept 19, 2003 8:03:49 GMT -5
Her and her mates are sat on a small wall looking through theyre shopping bags and laughing. I stand and watch her for a while before im snapped out of my trance WHAT AM I DOING? my band have just been told they are splitting, im ment to be going home to morn and instead im staring at a stranger. "But is she a stranger?" I ask myself She glances up from her mates and catchs my eye, smiles and continues talking. I swish my head round from side to side, there is no1 around me, she must have been smilling AT ME. Or maybe she was laughing at me, i think, i mean i am stood staring at her.
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Post by Hana~boo on Sept 19, 2003 8:35:55 GMT -5
I must have been standing here for hours staring at her. I just cant get my legs to budge...it's like im frozen in time and she is all that i can see I see her glance oer her mate's shoulder and she looks at me giving me one of her sweet smiles. "bye..see ya..call me when you get home and iwill tell all about it" i hear one her mates yells as she walks away with the other. I look like a stalker. Hopefully she doesnt get annoyed by the fact that i have been standing here for the past time staring ta her I see her wave to her mates and walk past me smiling as she galnces for one last time at me "go talk to her you wally" i mutter under my breath..i am usually good at chatting up girls even the sclub girls say that. Why am i having such trouble with her I finally sum up all the courage i had left in me and start walking towards her "hiya" i say ina quiet tone smiling cheesily..oh god that is so not me.. "hey" she replies back and returns the smile
Hana xxx
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Post by Mernie on Sept 19, 2003 9:01:26 GMT -5
good good godd!continue
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Sept 19, 2003 10:16:09 GMT -5
Mernie moo ask nicely BOSSY
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Post by Mernie on Sept 19, 2003 10:38:34 GMT -5
Mernie moo ask nicely BOSSY oh :(soz.... could u PLEASE post the next part NOW,NOW,NOW!!
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Post by aaronsangel on Sept 19, 2003 10:45:36 GMT -5
Mernie moo ask nicely BOSSY You cant talk thats sooooooo good! keep going!!!
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Sept 19, 2003 10:58:02 GMT -5
Actually kirsty i can tlk
Im just staring at her smilling and looking into her eyes, she looks at me like shes waiting for me to say something else “Hi” I say again, URGH pull yourself together jay she giggles slightly “Hi” she says again I frown “Do you know who I am?” I ask her looking confused “No sorry” she says, I frown even more and then notice shes grinning from ear to ear so I laugh slightly “Are you on your own now?” I ask “Your not meeting anyone are you?” am I being to pushy? Iamybe I shud back off, year hard to get, that’s the key “No” she smiles at me “I was gonna go and get something to eat actually, want to come?” her cheeks flush a rosey pink, it makes her look so cute, I smile and then remembe,r hard to get. “No, I don’t think so, ” I reply she looks disappointed and nods looking at the floor “Not before ive taken you shopping” I chip in The girl looks around, I don’t even know her name and I wanna take her shopping? Im not acting anything like myself Suddnly she gasps and puts her hand on my arm “It was great meetin you” she slurs before running off in the direction of a group of boys, so much for not meeting anyone.
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Post by aaronsangel on Sept 19, 2003 11:32:55 GMT -5
awwwwww poor jay! and to you maxi mcmuffin!
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Post by ~*Hazzie*~ on Sept 19, 2003 12:47:03 GMT -5
MORE MORE MORE!. . . . . PLEASE! I wanna know who the girl is, cos apparently, its not who ppl think it is. Luv harriet
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Post by parsnipgirl on Sept 19, 2003 14:59:00 GMT -5
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Post by clazabelle on Sept 19, 2003 16:00:31 GMT -5
Wowwwwwwwwww I love this story!! You HAVE to write more. I wanna know who the girl is!!!
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Post by Hana~boo on Sept 19, 2003 23:00:15 GMT -5
your wish is my command lol..actually Maxi threatened to kill me if i don't post soon so here it is lol..btw J/k luv ya Maxi ************************ I watch her run off to the group of boys immedtiatly chatting to them as if she knew them for quiet a while. I pitty my self as i stand like a complete muffin in the middle of the pavement looking lost. i glance one last time at her then walk in the other direction towards the buss stop. I decide this time would be my last bus trip for quiet a while and i am sure to head home right away. i had been walking all morning like a lost tourist and this whole day hadn't had one ray of sunshine. I make my way to the bench placed at the bus stop but my legs stumble on something. I look down "ugghhhhh" i yell disgusted. I had stepped on a pile of dirty napkins and tissues. Seriously, people need manners these days. They got no awarness of the enivronment. I laugh at myself..."what Jay, have you turned into an environmental activist all of a sudden?" i raise the question in my head not intending to answer it. Then i rub the bottom of my new trainers against the concrete pavement to get rid of all the nasty tissue stuck to it. however..i notice something shiny on the floor For some reason it grabs my attention and i find my self involuntarily picking it up off the floor and analyzing it. It was a gold colored card with a name and a telephone number scribbled on it rather than typed. I raise my eye brow as i shuffle it in my hands then it hits me This must have fell from one of her mate's hands when she was handing her her new cellphhone number. Even though the cards seemed useless as i havent even got a clue what her mate's full name was but for some reason i found it very valuable. I take the card and place it in my pocket makin sure to brush any dirt that might have been on it. then i stand with a few other people waiting for the bus. As i wait for the bus i look behind me to see if she was still chatting with those boys at the corner of the block. however, i notice they have all disappeared. I sigh looking down and then looking up again when her smile suddenly flash infront of my eyes. My head turns back to that flash an di spot her in the Mcdonald's right across the street munching on some food and laughing sitting with the same lads at a window table. I shift uncomfortably as i stand an di feel my fist tighten. "Why the hell am i getting angry, i dont even know her" i think to myself but i must have been thinking out loud as the lady next to me gave a strange look backing away a few steps from me. However, that wasn't really a surprise. what else is new..this day just keeps getting better and better..I think sarcastically to my self. Soon..im on the bus and can't wait to get home. i am so tired and a nap sounds very appealing to me right now Hana xxx (happy maxi..i made it a big post) lol
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Post by ~*Jenny Jenn Jenn*~ on Sept 19, 2003 23:31:38 GMT -5
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Sept 20, 2003 10:27:34 GMT -5
The bus drops me off practically outside the front door. I knock and wait for my auntie to answer. Although shes family i still feel knocking its the politist (sp) thing to do. "Jay you dont have to knock" she sighs when she opens the door. I step inside and my two youngest cousins come chargin out the living room and literally jump on me, wrapping there arms round and me and squealing. "At last, someone who shows they like me" i think to myself My auntie calls me and asks if i want anything to eat. Although food sounds great i just want to lie down. i decline the offer and make my way upstairs to my room. I shut the door behind me and flop onto the bed, lying back i remember the card in my pocket and reach in to take it out, i feel around but theres only bits of rubbish "Sh*t" i think outloud, where is it? Then i remember i put it in the other pocket. I take the card out and read it, contemplating weather to ring the number or not. What am i going to say tho? "Hi i dont know your name, or your friends name but i was wondering can i jave her number" Thats not gonna sound terribly good. Besides it might not even be theres, altho thinking about, THATS what they were showing each other, i remember the shiny card now, and the pen. But what if its a boyfriends number? what if one of those guys IS her boyfriend?? I cant do it, its stupid. I stand up and make my way over to the waste bin with the card.
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