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Post by Maxi Muffin on Oct 25, 2003 7:44:04 GMT -5
This is so good you should bring it out as a book! We still need 2 find out woh that mystery gurl is aswell! Luv harriet i 4got about her lol
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Post by ~*Hazzie*~ on Oct 25, 2003 8:45:33 GMT -5
U 4got? Ure supposed 2 b writing this stori! Mayb @ the end we find out who she is. . Luv harriet
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*top stuff!* *i'll get over it* *teehee*
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Post by iluvaaron on Oct 25, 2003 11:11:00 GMT -5
oh yerrrr! i 4got about her too!! i was so rapped up in poor daisy! awww
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Oct 25, 2003 12:36:21 GMT -5
lol *runs to hana and whispers* wot happened to the mystery girl?
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Post by ~*Hazzie*~ on Oct 25, 2003 14:25:43 GMT -5
You could make a twist at the end with her in it, that would make it even betta! Luv harriet
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Post by :::~*mandi loves aaron*~::: on Oct 25, 2003 15:05:09 GMT -5
oooh good job gys........polz add more!! ;D
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Post by Hana~boo on Oct 27, 2003 12:39:27 GMT -5
"is she going to be alright?" Stacey asks me fot what feels like the millionth time I nod my head and pull her in a brotherly embrace "its a;right...she is just a bit shook up.. she'll be fine" I reassure then the sound of the telephone ringing is heard from the living room Frankie sprints through the little hall into the living room to answer it "hello" she answers with almost a whisper. i can tell she was hoping it would be Mary The rest of the conversation is heard faintly as Frankie's voice start to quiten itself down Suddenly it hit and i remember the phone card that i had lost on my way here. I had to go back to retrieve it before its totally lost "I have to go now" Stacey pulls he self away from my embrace I just kiss her cheeks and run to the door "hey wehere are you going?" Calvin asks me as i start to slip my shoes on "arent you staying for the night?" he asks again "i have to go...i didnt even tell my aunt in im out..Daisy will be alright" i explain and grab my jacket hgeading to the door "Stacey, Calvin take care of Daisy..and call me if anything happens"I inform them and run out of the door "okay..bye" Calvin yells after me A few minutes later im still joggin down the streets looking around for the card hoping i would find it soon The image of the girl flashes in my mind and it makes me more persistent on finding the card... I look around more trying to catch my breath and see a little gold object shinning at the corner of the street right before the intersection I watch it carefully fearing the wiond would blow it away before it is out of my reach....
Hana xxx
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Post by ~*Hazzie*~ on Oct 27, 2003 14:06:47 GMT -5
*eyes glued 2 screen* more. . . Luv harriet
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Post by parsnipgirl on Oct 27, 2003 14:37:54 GMT -5
lol.. *eyes also glued 2 screen* more plzzzz
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Post by ~*Hazzie*~ on Oct 27, 2003 14:40:20 GMT -5
Yer i 4got the plzzzz Luv harriet
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Post by Mernie on Oct 27, 2003 15:30:33 GMT -5
*glued to the screen*wot they said
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Post by sami on Oct 28, 2003 2:25:20 GMT -5
more!
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iluvaaron
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Post by iluvaaron on Oct 28, 2003 6:42:32 GMT -5
yup yup! more plz!
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Post by Maxi Muffin on Oct 28, 2003 8:18:04 GMT -5
God you kids r so demanding lol
Casually i walk up to the card and try to pick it up as descreatly as possible. Im not too sure if there IS a descreate way of picking up rubbish from the floor, but i dont think i made it look to obvious. I scan the details on the card and smile as they are the same ones i remember, i shov it on my pocket tightly but cant help keeping hold of it, i dont want to loose it again, i glance around quickly before carrying off down the high street, i notice my aunties car, parked in the same place she dropped me off, but its empty "Jaaay" i high pitched wail comes from behind me as my auntie rushes out of woolworths "Are you ready to go home now?" she asks chucking her bags in the back seat, i nod and clamber into the car. When we get in, theres silence, no screaming kids to meet me, no blaring tv from the living room, just silence. I glance at my auntie "Sleepover" she smiles at me, guessing wot i was going to ask. "Can i use the fone?" i ask innocently, my mobiles getting low on credit, and the batterys practically flat "Sure" she nods before dissapearing into the kitchen. I pick up the small silver cordless fone and charge upstairs. I quickly take my trainers off and chuck them in the corner, then throw my jacket onto the bed. I slip mf hand into my pocket and pull out the card. i let out a sigh as i sit on the bed, clutching the card in my hand, staring at the numbers. "What am i going to say?" i think to myself
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Post by Mernie on Oct 28, 2003 8:29:30 GMT -5
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more please
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