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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 1, 2003 10:43:30 GMT -5
hey guys! this is my first real proper fanfic im writing thats in major works! this is the first and only chappie ive written atm but im hoping 2 get thru alot this holidays! HOPING that is! lol! i would appreciate any criticism - good or bad! to be blunt just tell me if its crap! heheh. all would help!
here it is! hope its ok!
Chapter 1 15 Dec 2008 Dear Diary,
Sorry I haven’t written in a while. I’ve had a lot of things on my mind – for example – Calvin. I’m so torn up right now. My heart is stinging from the wound he put through me emotionally. He broke up with me can you believe it! After 3 years he just wants to throw it all away like that! No explanation, no nothing! He won’t even listen to what I had to say! It’s just…it wasn’t my fault…
She threw her diary on the floor. Over the past two weeks she had pretended that nothing had happen and that everything was still the same. But it wasn’t.
He’d stormed out of their room with his last words “I don’t ever want to see you again!” hanging in her mind. The thought of that night still haunts right through her sending chills down her spine.
She slid down onto the floor, unknown to what would lie ahead in the future for her without Calvin. They’ve been through thick and thin and this, to her, was another extremely rough patch to work out. Obviously for him it was the last straw!
A tear suddenly appeared in her eye and slowly began to slide down her cheek. Quite a few were now following, trickling down her innocent face tracing the path set by the first.
Puzzled by her thoughts and emotions, she urgently needed someone to talk to. She couldn’t keep it inside anymore. 2 weeks with the decline of any contact has caused her mind to flood with anger and hurt and she couldn’t resist it anymore. Picking up the phone she pushed the digits in one at a time hoping the person would be there to answer.
“Hello?” Came a voice on the other end
“Frankie?! I need to talk!” with a break in her voice.
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Post by Hannahfan on Oct 1, 2003 11:55:29 GMT -5
:oWow at last you have written fan fic....It's absolutely amazing.....very cool.....plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update it soon.....
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Post by ~*Jenny Jenn Jenn*~ on Oct 1, 2003 21:00:10 GMT -5
WOW that's great ;D ~Jenn~
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Post by ~!i!*HaWaiiaNguRL*!i!~ on Oct 2, 2003 4:23:24 GMT -5
thats reallie good! can wait for u post up the next bit!
XOXO Christi
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 2, 2003 10:44:01 GMT -5
hey! thanks for the comments! heres the next bit! its a bit boring cos i hav 2 explain a lot things but hopefully i'll get 2 the interesting bits soon. can't wait to hear wat u peeps think! ;D
luv alitha xoxox
Chapter 2 Frankie’s POV: After 3 years together you would think they would get married by now! But apparently not! Calvin and Han have been seeing each other a year before the band separated and continued on until now.
The band had a good 4 year run and we all decided it was time to move on. Sure we’re still young but we felt as if we’ve done our bit for the industry and came to a decision that our goals merely weren’t the same anymore. Everyone wanted something different out of life so we acted on it. We sound almost similar to the S Club Seniors. Most of us wanted to concentrate more on our studies while doing small other jobs such as presenting or making appearances now and then just to stay in the showbiz.
Everyone still keeps in contact with one another. Some more than others but it’s fine. We have our monthly ritual of having dinner together to catch up on any news on everyone’s lives and to see how they’re going. I particularly keep constant contact with Hannah and Stacey. Out of the guys it would be Calvin and occasionally Aaron. Now that I think of it Hannah, Calvin and Aaron are going to stay away from each other for quite some time. Hopefully till things cool down and settled out. It’s weird to think that not too long ago, the 3 were inseparable – like stuck together with super glue and then tied with a rope for extra security! Even though Hannah and Calvin were dating, it didn’t change the bond of their friendship a slightest bit.
Han and Cal were the perfect couple. They had a connection I’ve never seen in the 19 years of my life. It’s unbelievable! They would finish each other’s sentences off, or know when the other is feeling miserable, even if they were miles apart and even talk the biggest bunch of nonsense that anyone has heard and still understand one other 100% completely. It’s almost frightening! But all in all, I really did believe they would be together forever, its sounds clichéd I know but watching the two, is like watching the Brady Bunch or 7th Heaven where everything worked out in the end. The main importance was both were in pure bliss and content just with the presence each other without saying a single word.
When they first announced to the public that they were dating, the media and fans were in frenzy! Girls were pouring their hearts out for Calv and sobbing like there was no tomorrow. The tabloids didn’t think it would last at all - they gave them 10 months max and boy did they prove them wrong! Their relationship did eventually calm down in the media replaced with the next shock revelation couple in line. As they say ‘today’s news is tomorrow’s fish ‘n’ chips paper!’
I don’t know why Han would do such a thing, such a big thing might I add and I certainly don’t know why Calvin would just take off like that without waiting for some kind of reasoning or explanation. He is not one to runaway from any conflicting situations. It must have crushed him pretty badly for him to do that. I have to make a mental note for myself to try and reach him ASAP. He hasn’t returned anyone’s calls since the event and I’m getting scared thinking what he could do.
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Post by Hannahfan on Oct 2, 2003 13:30:53 GMT -5
I want...... More, more more more more more and oh did i say more ;D
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Post by sami on Oct 3, 2003 9:40:43 GMT -5
more pls! u're good!
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 3, 2003 10:01:35 GMT -5
thanks u guys 4 the comments! ;D
i'll try post more soon. it'll prolly be 2moro arvo (according my time!) which its nite rite now. i still hav 2 finish the next chapter which shud be a bit more interesting than chap 2!
luv ya's! alitha xoxox
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 3, 2003 10:21:03 GMT -5
okies im sorry again i changed the title of the fic! its so hard 2 find one thats fits the story but this is a much better and it will be the last title change! so its officially called fool no more! by saying dat it stops me from changing it again! lol!
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Post by lil_ms_sneeky on Oct 6, 2003 10:07:54 GMT -5
hey heres the next chappie! please R&R wen you're done please.
Chapter 3 “Frankie I don’t know what happened! I didn’t mean to hurt him! I was upset and crying and I was telling Aaron what I saw, and the next thing I knew……I was kissing him” Hannah whispering the last sentence. Hannah went from feeling distressed one second to remorse the next.
Sensing what was about to come next, Frankie was hoping that she would be proven wrong “Han please don’t continue that sentence if it’s with ‘then one thing lead to another’” she pleaded fearing the worst for her.
Hannah stayed silent. She couldn’t let Frankie down like that. But unfortunately she did and she regretted it - she lost the one person that made her feel special, feel needed, feel wanted.
Frankie picking up on the silence realises the truth. “Han why did you do it?! Of all days and of all people! On your birthday?! With Az?! I didn’t think you would ever do something like that - it’s not like you at all!”
“I know Franx, I know! It just happened. I can’t explain it.” Hannah replied with a tone of irritation as she’s heard it a thousand times in her head. She hung her head in self-disgust. She felt her hands being watered by the tears from her eyes when she covered her face with them and began to wipe the tears away “I'm so sorry Frankie. For everything! If only I didn't see Calvin from afar that day then all this wouldn't have happened! It's not worth it feeling this much pain!" Hannah yelled and started to break down crying.
Frankie being the 'mum' of the band in the past, instantly went over to Han and hugged her tightly to let her know that she was there for her. She wasn't going to tell Hannah that Calvin was the one at loss or that he was wasn't right for her if this is how things are turning out. She wasn't going to say anything that would remind her of Calvin of any sort. "Sshhhh Han. You don't need to be sorry for anything. Everything's going to alright I promise. I will help you through this ok?" Pulling away from the hug and hoping she had stopped crying now.
"Ok..." Han mumbled through her tears "Thanks for being here for me" Han was grateful Frankie understood that she didn't want to be bombarded with questions about everything that occurred and that she wasn't ready to answer anything specifically yet.
Frankie who was also lost in her own thoughts, was the complete opposite to Hannah. She did understand that Han wasn't up for an investigation but something was nagging her in the back of her mind. All she could think of was one thing:
"Han? What did you see Calvin do that upset you?!"
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Post by Hannahfan on Oct 6, 2003 11:58:06 GMT -5
It's amazing carry on ;D
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Post by ~¤~Cuddles~¤~ on Oct 6, 2003 12:44:26 GMT -5
Oh no.. make Han&Cal back together again.. It was all Aarons fault Keep up the good work .. It`s great! Luv, Han
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Post by parsnipgirl on Oct 6, 2003 12:46:18 GMT -5
lol.. trust u hanny.. yeah!! add the nest part soon!! its really good!!
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Post by CalvinHannah on Oct 6, 2003 13:30:53 GMT -5
ohhhh! PLZ keep goin!!!
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Post by annietpotc on Oct 6, 2003 13:31:53 GMT -5
noooooooo...... make han and cal bak together... pwease.....
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